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SOME PEOPLE BELIVE THAT FAMILY MEMEBERS ARE IMPORTANR THAN FRIENDS. DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE?

SOME PEOPLE BELIVE THAT FAMILY MEMEBERS ARE IMPORTANR THAN FRIENDS. ke7YW
FRIENDS AND FAMILIES HAVE EQUAL ROLE IN BULDING A HUMAN LIFE. A LINO SHARE OF PEOPLE BELIVE THAT FAMILY IS AN ESSENTIAL PART WHEREAS OTHERS BELIEVE THAT FRIENDS ARE IMPORTANT IN LIFE. I STRONGLY AFIRM THAT, BOTH KIN AND KITH ARE NEEDED FOR A PERSON. THE ENSUING PARAGRAPH WOULD VIVIDLY SHOW MY PERCEPTION FOR THE SAME. FRIST AND FOREMOST, FAMILY ALWAYS GIVES A MORAL SUPPORT FOR EVERYONE. TO ELOBORATE, PARENTS WOULD BE THERE FOR US IN ALL OUR SITUTATIONS AND THEY MIGHT HELP US IN TACKLING CERTAIN HURDLES WHICH WE ARE FACING IN TACKLING CERTAN HURDLES WHICH WE ARE FACING. FOR INSTANCE, FAMILY WOULD HELP STUDENTSIN SLOVING THEIR ACCADEMIC ISSUES AS WELL AS EMOTIONAL PROBLEMS. MOREOVER, FAMILY WILL STAY WITH US IN ANY CIRCUMSTANCES. TO EXPAND, FAMILY MEMBERS WOULD BE THERE WITH US IN ALL AWFUL SITUATION. CONSEQUENTLY FAMILY PLAYS A KEY ROLE IN HUMAN'S LIFE. APART FROM THIS, FRIENDS ARE ALSO IMPORTANT. INITALY, MOST OF US WOLUD SPEND HALF OF OUR LIFE SPAN WITH OUR FRINEDS AND THEY MIGHT BE LIKE OUR FAMILY. FOR EXAMPLE, FINANCIAL AND EMOTIONAL SUPPORT GIVEN BY FRIENDS WHICH HELP US TO MITIGATE THE PROBLEMS. IN ADDITION TO THAT, WE CAN SHARE ALL OUR SORROWS AND DIFFICULTIES WITH A FRIEND, WHOM WOULD HELP US IN SORTING OUT THE MENANCE AND CONSTANLY SUPPORTS AND MOTIVATE US TO BECOME A SUCESSFUL PERSON. THUS, FRIENDS PLAYS AN INEVITABLE ROLE IN PUPILS LIFE TO SUM UP, THE AFFERMENTIONED PARAGRAPH CLEARLY PORTARY THE IMPORTANCE OF BOTH FRIENDS AND FAMILY IN MAINTAINING HEALTHIER LIFE.
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FRIENDS
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FAMILIES
HAVE EQUAL ROLE IN
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BULDING
A HUMAN
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LIFE
. A LINO SHARE OF
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PEOPLE
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BELIVE
THAT
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FAMILY
IS AN ESSENTIAL PART WHEREAS OTHERS BELIEVE THAT
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FRIENDS
ARE
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IMPORTANT
IN
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LIFE
. I
STRONGLY
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AFIRM
THAT, BOTH KIN AND KITH
ARE NEEDED
FOR A PERSON. THE ENSUING PARAGRAPH WOULD
VIVIDLY
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SHOW
MY PERCEPTION FOR THE SAME.
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FRIST
AND FOREMOST,
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FAMILY
ALWAYS GIVES A MORAL SUPPORT FOR EVERYONE. TO
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ELOBORATE
, PARENTS WOULD BE THERE FOR US IN ALL OUR
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SITUTATIONS
AND THEY MIGHT
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HELP
US IN TACKLING CERTAIN HURDLES WHICH WE ARE FACING IN TACKLING
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CERTAN
HURDLES WHICH WE ARE FACING.
FOR INSTANCE
,
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FAMILY
WOULD
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HELP
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STUDENTSIN
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SLOVING
THEIR
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ACCADEMIC
ISSUES
AS WELL
AS EMOTIONAL PROBLEMS.
MOREOVER
,
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FAMILY
WILL STAY WITH US IN ANY CIRCUMSTANCES. TO EXPAND,
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FAMILY
MEMBERS WOULD BE THERE WITH US IN ALL AWFUL SITUATION.
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CONSEQUENTLY
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FAMILY
PLAYS A KEY ROLE IN HUMAN'S
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LIFE
. APART FROM THIS,
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FRIENDS
ARE
ALSO
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IMPORTANT
.
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INITALY
, MOST OF US
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WOLUD
SPEND HALF OF OUR
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LIFE
SPAN WITH OUR
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FRINEDS
AND THEY MIGHT BE LIKE OUR
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FAMILY
.
FOR EXAMPLE
, FINANCIAL AND EMOTIONAL SUPPORT
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GIVEN
BY
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FRIENDS
WHICH
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HELP
US TO MITIGATE THE PROBLEMS.
IN ADDITION
TO THAT, WE CAN SHARE ALL OUR SORROWS AND DIFFICULTIES WITH A
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FRIEND
, WHOM WOULD
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HELP
US IN SORTING OUT THE
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MENANCE
AND
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CONSTANLY
SUPPORTS AND MOTIVATE US TO BECOME A
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SUCESSFUL
PERSON.
THUS
,
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FRIENDS
PLAYS AN INEVITABLE ROLE IN PUPILS
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LIFE
TO SUM UP, THE
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AFFERMENTIONED
PARAGRAPH
CLEARLY
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PORTARY
THE IMPORTANCE OF BOTH
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FRIENDS
AND
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FAMILY
IN MAINTAINING HEALTHIER
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LIFE
.
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IELTS essay SOME PEOPLE BELIVE THAT FAMILY MEMEBERS ARE IMPORTANR THAN FRIENDS.

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