Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Hosting an International Sports event is good for the country but few people think it is bad . State your opinion and discuss both the views

Hosting an International Sports event is good for the country but few people think it is bad. State your opinion and discuss both the views 1n8nL
Presenting a global sports event for the country can be tremendously beneficial in terms of economical growth. Most of the countries, host sports event at international level as it is considered advantegeous, but not all people think the same way. In this essay i will state both the views of peole wheater it is bad or good. Most of the people think that global sports program are really extraordinary thing which international authorities of various countries allow this events. This global events can help the country to build a strong reputation based on the perfomance of thier aspirants at international events. For instance, the USA currently holding numerous gold, silver as well as bronze medals as compared to any other country, this creates a stronghold on international level. Thus, people think it not bad at all that thier country can hold a top position at global level. On the contrary, there are people who think sports event are not really good as if a country's participants will unable to perform good then thier reputation will go down. In my point of view, i strongly support hosting these sports event as it can motivate people to take a stand to represent thier country. For example, in 2018, i got an oppurtanity to represent my country and i got a gold medal for my country. Therefore, people should take oppurtanity to show their skills as wells as country's talent. In conclusion, i will take side of people who think this is good because i also want my country to hold good position. Representing a country will be a great honour for the people also and they can show the talent as well.
Presenting a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
global
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sports
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
event
for the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
country
can be
tremendously
beneficial in terms of
Did you mean "economic" (=connected with economy)?
economical
growth. Most of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
countries
, host
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sports
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
event
at
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
international
level as it
is considered
Possible spelling mistake found.
advantegeous
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
not all
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
think
the same way. In this essay
Did you mean "I"?
i
will state both the views of
Possible spelling mistake found.
peole
Possible spelling mistake found.
wheater
it is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bad
or
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
.

Most of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
think
that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
global
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sports
program are
really
extraordinary thing which
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
international
authorities of various
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
countries
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
allow
Did you mean "these"?
this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
events
. This
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
global
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
events
can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
country
to build a strong reputation based on the
Possible spelling mistake found.
perfomance
of
Possible spelling mistake found.
thier
aspirants at
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
international
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
events
.
For instance
, the USA
currently
holding numerous gold, silver
as well
as bronze medals as compared to any other
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
country
, this creates a stronghold on
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
international
level.
Thus
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
think
it not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bad
at all that
Possible spelling mistake found.
thier
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
country
can hold a top position at
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
global
level.

On the contrary
, there are
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
who
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
think
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sports
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
event
are not
really
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
good
as if a country's participants will unable to perform
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
good
then
Possible spelling mistake found.
thier
reputation will go down. In my point of view,
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
strongly
support hosting these
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sports
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
event
as it can motivate
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
to take a stand to represent
Possible spelling mistake found.
thier
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
country
.
For example
, in 2018,
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
an
Possible spelling mistake found.
oppurtanity
to represent my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
country
and
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
a gold medal for my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
country
.
Therefore
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
should take
Possible spelling mistake found.
oppurtanity
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
as wells as country's talent.

In conclusion
,
Did you mean "I"?
i
will take side of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
who
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
think
this is
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
good
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
also
want my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
country
to hold
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
good
position. Representing a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
country
will be a great
Possible spelling mistake. 'honour' is British English.
honour
for the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
also and
they can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
the talent
as well
.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay Hosting an International Sports event is good for the country but few people think it is bad. State your opinion and discuss both the views

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
280 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts





Get more results for topic:
  • Hosting an International Sports event is good for the country but few people think it is bad . State your opinion and discuss both the views