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Throughout Friday, relatives of the eminent journalist Hassan Shahriar and doctors treating him were looking to get their hands on an Actemra injection. The drug was one of their last hopes to save his life. He was battling Covid-19 in the intensive care unit (ICU) of a private hospital in the capital. The drug was not found. Shahriar breathed his last on Saturday. Many more critical Covid-19 patients like Shahriar who doctors say could have had a better chance of surviving with an Actemra injection have died recently amid a massive shortage of the drug in the country. However, the importer of the injection in the country, Radiant Pharmaceuticals Ltd, said the next consignment of the injection will arrive within the next two or three days and will reduce the crisis. Dr Nirupam Das, chief administrator of the Bangladesh Doctors Foundation, who also tried to get the drug for Shahriar, told The Business Standard, "I have searched at all the Radiant booths from Friday afternoon but

Throughout Friday, relatives of the eminent journalist Hassan Shahriar and doctors treating him were looking to get their hands on an Actemra injection. The drug was one of their last hopes to save his life. He was battling Covid-19 in the intensive care unit (ICU) of a private hospital in the capital. The drug was not found. Shahriar breathed his last on Saturday. Many more critical Covid-19 patients like Shahriar who doctors say could have had a better chance of surviving with an Actemra injection have died recently amid a massive shortage of the drug in the country. However, the importer of the injection in the country, Radiant Pharmaceuticals Ltd, said the next consignment of the injection will arrive within the next two or three days and will reduce the crisis. Dr Nirupam Das, chief administrator of the Bangladesh Doctors Foundation, who also tried to get the drug for Shahriar, told The Business Standard, "I have searched at all the Radiant booths from Friday afternoon but D2966
Throughout Friday, relatives of the eminent journalist Hassan Shahriar and doctors treating him were looking to get their hands on an Actemra injection. The drug was one of their last hopes to save his life. He was battling Covid-19 in the intensive care unit (ICU) of a private hospital in the capital. The drug was not found. Shahriar breathed his last on Saturday. Many more critical Covid-19 patients like Shahriar who doctors say could have had a better chance of surviving with an Actemra injection have died recently amid a massive shortage of the drug in the country. However, the importer of the injection in the country, Radiant Pharmaceuticals Ltd, said the next consignment of the injection will arrive within the next two or three days and will reduce the crisis. Dr Nirupam Das, chief administrator of the Bangladesh Doctors Foundation, who also tried to get the drug for Shahriar, told The Business Standard, "I have searched at all the Radiant booths from Friday afternoon but the injection was not found anywhere. This injection produces good results among patients in the ICU. There is a huge demand for it, but Radiant is importing it in very low numbers. " Actemra is a drug used mainly for the treatment of rheumatoid arthritis and systemic juvenile idiopathic arthritis. Health workers have been using it to treat critical Covid-19 patients. Demand for the drug has recently sky-rocketed across the country amid the second wave of the Covid-19 pandemic, creating a massive shortage in its supply. According to health officials, the Actemra injection is producing positive results among critical patients in the ICU. Dr Shoman Aniruddha, an anesthesiologist at the ICU of Mugda General Hospital, told the Business Standard, "Although there has been no specific publication (research) about it, we have seen that the injection creates a positive response in 10-20% of critical Covid-19 patients, especially among those who require a high level of oxygen. But now the supply of the injection in demand ratio has turned very low. " Dr Shoman said the drug is not supplied by any hospital. Relatives of patients are asked to purchase it and provide it to health officials to be used for patients' treatment. The injection was first used in a limited range in treating critical Covid-19 patients during the first wave of the infection in the country. At the time, a patient's relatives would be able to get the medicine just by contacting Radiant's booth. But now, one has to submit a prescription, patient's name, hospital's name to Radiant in order to get the medicine, Dr Shoman added.
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was one of their last hopes to save his life. He was battling Covid-19 in the intensive care unit (ICU) of a private hospital in the capital. The
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who doctors say could have had a better chance of surviving with an Actemra
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Pharmaceuticals Ltd, said the
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mainly
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Covid-19
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patients
. Demand for the
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has recently sky-rocketed across the country amid the second wave of the Covid-19 pandemic, creating a massive shortage in its supply.

According to health officials, the Actemra
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injection
is producing
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positive
results among
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in the ICU.

Dr
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, an anesthesiologist at the ICU of
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General Hospital,
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the Business Standard,
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response in 10-20% of
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Covid-19
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patients
,
especially
among those who require a high level of oxygen.
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now
the supply of the
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in demand ratio has turned
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low.
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said the
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is not supplied by any hospital. Relatives of
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are asked
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for patients' treatment.

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during the
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IELTS essay Throughout Friday, relatives of the eminent journalist Hassan Shahriar and doctors treating him were looking to get their hands on an Actemra injection. The drug was one of their last hopes to save his life. He was battling Covid-19 in the intensive care unit (ICU) of a private hospital in the capital. The drug was not found. Shahriar breathed his last on Saturday. Many more critical Covid-19 patients like Shahriar who doctors say could have had a better chance of surviving with an Actemra injection have died recently amid a massive shortage of the drug in the country. However, the importer of the injection in the country, Radiant Pharmaceuticals Ltd, said the next consignment of the injection will arrive within the next two or three days and will reduce the crisis. Dr Nirupam Das, chief administrator of the Bangladesh Doctors Foundation, who also tried to get the drug for Shahriar, told The Business Standard, "I have searched at all the Radiant booths from Friday afternoon but

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