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to describe your most memorable holiday

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One of my best memories is the trip went to Ha long bay with my family in the summer holiday. Ha long bay is in quang ninh provice. it is the one of the most beautiful wondernatural in the worl. Ha long bay is nice, clean and many things to discover. After lunch we has from to hotel four star. we stayed at hotel and took rest in the hotel. in the afternoon we went to the beach and swam the sea. I love the vacation. I want to come back to this place again in the future
One of my best memories is the trip went to Ha long bay with my family in the summer holiday. Ha long bay is in
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IELTS essay to describe your most memorable holiday

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  American English
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97 words
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