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to achieve sustainable development in city society and promote economic prosperity, the importance of housing cannot be ignored.

to achieve sustainable development in city society and promote economic prosperity, the importance of housing cannot be ignored. 7JX2n
on the one hand, to achieve sustainable development in city society and promote economic prosperity, the importance of housing cannot be ignored. Affordable housing is one of the living standards of people. Less housing supply will increase the price of apartments, low income people will not have enough money to buy from which leads to more people becoming homeless. In addition, the safety of the community can be affected by the increasing number of homeless people resulting in increased crime rates.
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the one hand, to achieve sustainable development in city society and promote economic prosperity, the importance of housing cannot be
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. Affordable housing is one of the living standards of
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. Less housing supply will increase the price of apartments, low income
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people
will not have
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money to
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buy
from which leads to more
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becoming homeless.
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by the increasing number of homeless
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resulting in increased crime rates.
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IELTS essay to achieve sustainable development in city society and promote economic prosperity, the importance of housing cannot be ignored.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
81 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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