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Three pictures described in very good english

Three pictures described in very good english 70pK3
I can see a man sitting on a bad and watching TV. The room look tidy. There are posters on the wall and a guitar is standing in the corner. The weather outsite is cloudy and rainy. The man looks unhappy. the second picture is similar, but the wether is looking better. The sun shines. In the third picture there are four guys playing basketball. They look happy and sweaty. The sun ist schining. All pictures are black and write, so they look like drawings.
I can
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sitting on a
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and watching TV. The room
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look
tidy. There are posters on the wall and a guitar is standing in the corner. The weather
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outsite
is cloudy and rainy. The
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unhappy.
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the
second picture is similar,
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the
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wether
is looking better. The sun shines. In the third picture there are four guys playing basketball. They
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happy and sweaty. The sun
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ist
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schining
. All pictures are black and write,
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they
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like drawings.
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IELTS essay Three pictures described in very good english

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
85 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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