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I am writing to you to provide an explanation about why there is no sports event in this year. Our company in this year facing a financial issue and the employees busy with finding a solution. On the other hand, Sport is one of the top activities which bring great results for people of any age. Also, as we know how the sports useful for our body and it helps to improve health specially for the young people. Moreover, sports help to improve brain activity as well, making it the best way to avoid numerous possible illnesses. As well as, the past three years we did a great sports events, taking a break this year is considered as Thank you for considering our situation. Best Regards Norah

I am writing to you to provide an explanation about why there is no You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sports
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event
 in this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
. Our This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 in this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
 facing a financial issue and the employees busy with finding a solution.

On the other hand
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
Sport
 is one of the top activities which bring great results for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 of any age. Also
, as we know how the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sports
 useful for our body and it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 health specially
 for the young This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
. Moreover
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sports
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 brain activity as well
, making it the best way to avoid numerous possible illnesses.

As well
 as, the past three years we did a great You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sports
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionshappenings
events
, taking a break this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
is considered
 as

Thank you for considering our situation.

Best Regards

Norah