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This shows manufacturing instant noodles. this machine can make a lot of production at a time. And, I think it is very easy to make them. So, this machine does not need people's help. People just turn on the switch, so instant noodle can make, and we can get it. I thought the manufacturing technology is advancing. We seldom touch the production, so if something is inserted or something is broken or something is bad, we are hardly aware of that mistakes. Therefore, we should supervise this process.

This shows manufacturing instant noodles. this machine can make a lot of production at a time. And, I think it is very easy to make them. So, this machine does not need people's help. People just turn on the switch, so instant noodle can make, and we can get it. I thought the manufacturing technology is advancing. We seldom touch the production, so if something is inserted or something is broken or something is bad, we are hardly aware of that mistakes. Therefore, we should supervise this process. QLPA1
This shows manufacturing instant noodles. this machine can make a lot of production at a time. And, I think it is very easy to make them. So, this machine does not need people's help. People just turn on the switch, so instant noodle can make, and we can get it. I thought the manufacturing technology is advancing. We seldom touch the production, so if something is inserted or something is broken or something is bad, we are hardly aware of that mistakes. Therefore, we should supervise this process.
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IELTS essay This shows manufacturing instant noodles. this machine can make a lot of production at a time. And, I think it is very easy to make them. So, this machine does not need people's help. People just turn on the switch, so instant noodle can make, and we can get it. I thought the manufacturing technology is advancing. We seldom touch the production, so if something is inserted or something is broken or something is bad, we are hardly aware of that mistakes. Therefore, we should supervise this process.

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