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I explain about how to make noodles.

I explain about how to make noodles. YLYA5

I explain about how instant noodles are manufactured. First, we supply a lot of flour to storage silos. Noodles are made of flour, so we use it a lot. Second, we mix the flour with water and oil, and make paste. Third, we get the dough thin, and extend it on the sheet. Fourth, we strip the dough from the rollers and cut it into small pieces to make noodles. Fifth, we form it into beautiful circle, because we have to put it in a container. And next, we fry and dry it. Additionally, we put vegetables and some spices to the cups. Last, we do labelling and sealing to sell.

I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interpret
explain
 about how instant noodles are manufactured
.

First
, we supply This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 flour to storage silos. Noodles are made
 of flour, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 it a lot.

Second, we mix the flour with water and oil, and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 paste.

Third, we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 the dough thin, and extend it on the sheet.

Fourth, we strip the dough from the rollers and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :minimize
cut
 it into This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 pieces to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 noodles.

Fifth, we form it into This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :gorgeousstunning
beautiful
 circle, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 we This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 put it in a container.

And next
, we fry and dry it. Additionally
, we put vegetables and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 spices to the cups.

Last, we The usual collocation for an activity ending in "-ing" is "go" not "do" or "play." Revise: "go labelling".go labelling
do labelling
 and sealing to sell. 