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How to make instant noodles

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Flour is carried from the Strage silos. After they mixed with water and oil, they put on the rollers and are stretched by it. Then, the dough sheets were made perfectly. After that, a machine make the dough sheets noodles discs. Then, the noodles discs are cooked in oil and are dried. That way is how to make noodles discs. The noodles discs, vegetables and spices are put in cups that are a form of a tube. The cups are the symbol of instant noodles. Finally, the cups are labelled and sealed. Thay is how to make instant noodles.
Flour
is carried
from the
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Strage
silos. After they mixed with water and oil, they put on the rollers and
are stretched
by it. Then, the dough sheets
were made
perfectly
. After that, a machine
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make
the dough sheets
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noodles
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discs
. Then, the
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noodles
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discs
are cooked
in oil and
are dried
. That way is how to
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make
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noodles
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discs
. The
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noodles
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discs
, vegetables and spices
are put
in cups that are a form of a tube. The cups are the symbol of instant
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noodles
.
Finally
, the cups
are labelled
and sealed.
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Thay
is how to
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make
instant
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noodles
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IELTS essay How to make instant noodles

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