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The unlimited uses of cars may cause many problems. What are those and give solutions?

The unlimited uses of cars may cause many problems. What are those and give solutions? g5e33
In this modern epoch, people give preference to neither public transports nor walking and bicycle as well as the uses of car is increased rapidly. This essay analyses the several causes and a number of measures to solve this issue. Let us deliberate some compelling reasons which will lead towards a logical inference. To embark on, there are myriad of complications to shore light upon the given proclivity. Discussing the first point, which types of obstacles are occured the over used of cars.
In this modern epoch,
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people
give preference to neither public transports nor walking and bicycle
as well
as the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
uses
of car
is increased
rapidly
. This essay analyses the several causes and a number of measures to solve this issue.
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Let
us deliberate
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some
compelling reasons which will lead towards a logical inference.

To embark on, there are myriad of complications to shore light upon the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
proclivity. Discussing the
first
point, which types of obstacles are
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occured
the over
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used
of cars.

IELTS essay The unlimited uses of cars may cause many problems. What are those and give solutions?

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
83 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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