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This pictures below show how tomato ketchup is made. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features

The given illustration provides information related to the process of making the tomato ketchup. In general, this production chain can be divided into two main stages, beginning with the preparation of raw materials for cooking and processing, ending with the packaging for later consumption. At the beginning of the process, The workers put the tomatoes in the basket and classified them into 2 groups: soft good and bad. The good tomatoes are continuously taken to a factory by a van. Here, they are removed some unnecessary parts, typically as stalk, seeds and skin, before being crushes in a container. Subsequently, they are mixed with sugar, vinegar and salt to form a mixture and then boiled in order to prepare for the next steps. At the following stage, the mixture is left about 2 hours to get a right temperature. Then, they are poured into bottles and labelled. Before being packed into boxes, the bottles are checked quality. Finally, the process ends with the boxes of tomato ketchup bottles that have been sealed so that the completed product is ready for retail at supermarkets by lorries. Consumers may feel more delicious when using it with hamburgers or fries. Overall, it is clear that making tomato ketchup is a simple process, except for the taking and sorting to separate tomatoes, everything is mechanically done.

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 illustration provides information related to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentcasetechniqueproceedingcoursemeans
process
 of making the tomato ketchup. In general
, this production chain can be divided
 into two main stages, beginning with the preparation of raw materials for cooking and processing, ending with the packaging for later consumption.

At the beginning of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentcasetechniqueproceedingcoursemeans
process
, The workers put the tomatoes in the basket and classified them into 2 groups: soft This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
. The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 tomatoes are continuously
 taken to a factory by a van. Here, they are removed
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 unnecessary parts, typically
 as stalk, seeds and skin, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 being crushes in a container. Subsequently
, they are mixed
 with sugar, vinegar and salt to form a mixture and then boiled in order to prepare for the next
 steps.

At the following stage, the mixture is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 about 2 hours to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 a right temperature. Then, they are poured
 into bottles and labelled. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
Before
being packed
 into boxes, the bottles are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitored
checked
 quality. Finally
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentcasetechniqueproceedingcoursemeans
process
 ends with the boxes of tomato ketchup bottles that have been sealed
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that the completed product is ready for retail at supermarkets by ‘lorries’ is a common British expression. Consider using expressions more common to American English.trucks
lorries
. Consumers may feel more delicious when using it with hamburgers or fries.

Overall
, it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that making tomato ketchup is a simple You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentcasetechniqueproceedingcoursemeans
process
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :with the exception of
except for
 the taking and sorting to separate tomatoes, everything is mechanically
 done. 