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Parents should take courses in parenting in order to improve the lives of their children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

IN TODAY'S GENERATION CHILDREN NEED TO BE IN A RIGHT PATH RATHER THAN DEVATING INORDER, TO BE THAT PARENTS MUST KNOWN ALL ABOUT THE PARENTING TIPS SO IT BRINGS THEIR CHILDREN TO ENLIGHT THEIR LIVES. I TOO BELIEVE IN THAT SCENERIO. FIRST REASON WHY I AM AGREEING, IS THAT PARENTS ARE NOT GETTING A APPROPRIATE TIME TO BE WITH CHILDREN. TO BE PRECISE, THEY ARE SPENDING THEIR TIME ON PHONES AND MOREOVER, THEIR THOUGHT IS ON THE MONEY THEY SHOULD GAIN FOR UPCOMING YEARS. SUCH AS, THE SPACE IN THE BONDING OF CHILDREN BECOME SHRINKAGE. MAINLY VALUABLE TIME OF SPENDING IN YOUNGER ONESEVENTUALLY GETS SLOWER THAN EXPECTED. SECOND FUNDEMENTAL REASON MORE PEOPLE ARE LIVING AS NUCLEAR FAMILY THAN JOINT FAMILY. TO BE CLEARER, THE GRANDPARENTS LEVEL OF PARENTING IS NOT SEEN IN THIS GENERATION IN ADDITION TO IT IS THEY LACK OF KNOWLEDGE AND BUSY SCHEDULE IN THE LIFE OF PARENTS. FOR INSTANCE, THE SENIOR GENERATION WILL PROVIDE THE CONCEPTS TO CHILDREN LIKE A GOOD INTERACTIVE STORIES SO THAT THEY HAVE THE TENDENCY TO HEAR IT.

IN This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
TODAY
'S GENERATION You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinfanttoddleradolescentjuvenileyouthteenager
CHILDREN
 NEED TO BE IN A RIGHT PATH RATHER
 THAN Possible spelling mistake found.DEBATINGDEVOTINGDEVIATING
DEVATING
Possible spelling mistake found.ORDERBORDERDISORDERINSIDERINFORMERINTRUDER
INORDER
, TO BE THAT PARENTS This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
MUST
Did you mean “have KNOWN” or “know”?Have KNOWNKnow
KNOWN
 ALL ABOUT THE PARENTING TIPS This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
SO
 IT BRINGS THEIR You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinfanttoddleradolescentjuvenileyouthteenager
CHILDREN
 TO Possible spelling mistake found.PENLIGHT
ENLIGHT
 THEIR This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resides
LIVES
. Consider using commas to set off ‘too’, if you want to emphasize an abrupt change of thought.I, too,
I TOO
 BELIEVE IN THAT Possible spelling mistake found.SCENARIOSCENE RIO
SCENERIO
. FIRST
 REASON WHY I AM AGREEING, IS THAT PARENTS ARE NOT GETTING A APPROPRIATE TIME TO BE WITH You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinfanttoddleradolescentjuvenileyouthteenager
CHILDREN
. TO BE PRECISE, THEY ARE SPENDING THEIR TIME ON PHONES AND MOREOVER
, THEIR This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonedassumedbelievedconsidered
THOUGHT
 IS ON THE MONEY THEY SHOULD GAIN FOR UPCOMING YEARS. SUCH AS, THE SPACE IN THE BONDING OF You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinfanttoddleradolescentjuvenileyouthteenager
CHILDREN
 BECOME SHRINKAGE. MAINLY
 VALUABLE TIME OF SPENDING IN YOUNGER Possible spelling mistake found.
ONESEVENTUALLY
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquires
GETS
 SLOWER THAN This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipated
EXPECTED
. SECOND Possible spelling mistake found.FUNDAMENTAL
FUNDEMENTAL
 REASON MORE This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
PEOPLE
 ARE LIVING AS NUCLEAR FAMILY THAN JOINT FAMILY. TO BE CLEARER, THE GRANDPARENTS LEVEL OF PARENTING IS NOT This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
SEEN
 IN THIS GENERATION IN ADDITION
 TO IT IS THEY LACK OF KNOWLEDGE AND BUSY SCHEDULE IN THE LIFE OF PARENTS. FOR INSTANCE
, THE SENIOR GENERATION WILL PROVIDE THE CONCEPTS TO You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinfanttoddleradolescentjuvenileyouthteenager
CHILDREN
 LIKE A This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
GOOD
 INTERACTIVE STORIES This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
SO
 THAT THEY HAVE THE TENDENCY TO HEAR IT. 