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In future, nobody will buy printed newspaper or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying.

At present, technology makes an important role in people’s life, for increasing technology, everybody will be able to read everything they want from online without paying instead of buying newspapers or books in future. This essay agrees with this statement and also disagree with this opinion, This essay will discuss both of the agree and disagree with this opinion. Nowadays, technology has been increased gradually, so that today people are depending on internet. For rising sharply modern global technology, people will be depended on using online newspapers or books rather than buying this. There are plethora benefits of using online apps. Online newspapers and books are more popular things for young generation students and peoples, because the apps that can be find easily on internet. For example, google play store is one of the most famous apps store, that everyone can find online apps. It is popular for people’s life because they can find all types of newspaper like Daily star, New York Times and BBC news. Moreover, for researchers and students they can find journals and technology related books. However, sometimes online newspapers and books are not popular for some people. Because if they are using apps, they have needed electronics devices like smart phones or computers, but it is not affordable for someone. In addition, for using this type of apps everybody needs internet, so it is not easy to read online newspaper and books anytime they want; but it is easy to buy printed newspapers or books easily from the shops. Sometimes it depends on person’s personal choice; because, book lovers are interested to buy books from shops. In conclusion, online apps will be changed people choice instead of buying printed newspapers or books from the shops in future.
At present,
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technology
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makes
an
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important
role in
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people’s
life, for increasing
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technology
, everybody will be able to read everything they want from
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online
without paying
instead
of buying
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newspapers
or
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books
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in future
. This essay
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agrees
with this statement and
also
disagree with this opinion, This essay will discuss both of the
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agree
and disagree with this opinion.

Nowadays,
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technology
has
been increased
gradually
,
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so
that
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today
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people
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are depending
on internet. For rising
sharply
modern global
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technology
,
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people
will
be depended
on using
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online
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newspapers
or
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books
rather
than buying this. There are plethora benefits of using
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online
apps.
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Online
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newspapers
and
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books
are more popular things for young generation students and
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peoples
,
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because
the apps that can be
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find
easily
on internet.
For example
,
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google play store
is one of the most
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famous
apps store, that everyone can
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find
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online
apps. It is popular for
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people’s
life
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because
they can
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find
all types of
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newspaper
like
If the term is a proper noun, use initial capitals.
Daily star
, New York Times and BBC news.
Moreover
, for researchers and students they can
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find
journals and
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technology
related books.

However
,
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sometimes
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online
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newspapers
and
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books
are not popular for
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some
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people
.
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Because
if they are using apps, they have needed electronics devices like
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smart phones
or computers,
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but
it is not affordable for someone.
In addition
, for using this type of apps everybody needs internet,
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so
it is not easy to read
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online
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newspaper
and
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books
anytime they want;
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but
it is easy to
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buy
printed
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newspapers
or
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books
easily
from the shops.
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Sometimes
it depends on person’s personal choice;
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because
,
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book
lovers
are interested
to
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buy
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books
from shops.

In conclusion
,
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online
apps will be
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changed
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people
choice
instead
of buying printed
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newspapers
or
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
from the shops
The phrase ‘in future’ is British English. Did you mean: “in the future”?
in future
.
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IELTS essay In future, nobody will buy printed newspaper or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
292 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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