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This is an email you have received from an English friend, Steven: Subject: advice please!

This is an email you have received from an English friend, Steven: Subject: advice please! 5kEWQ

what's up Steven? Oh men you have a really issue, however I will try to help you in this email. The way I see maybe you should first talk with your parents, explain the reason why you want to following a career in music and show how good you are, can be they acknowledge that is best you following your dreams. Although this works, another piece of advice that I can give is you should not to listen to what your parents say, I know it is hard at firts, nevertheless is what you want to be, is your life, the only person that will going to be dissapoint in the future if you do not following your carrer in music is it only you, so go ahead, confront your parents, you are not child anymore. I hope that this email help you, I am not good in advises but I really I think this clean your mind about. I look forward to hearing from you. Kind regards, Your Friend.

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I look forward to hearing from you.

Kind regards, Your Friend. 