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Think of a person you consider a role model.Why did you choose this person?

Think of a person you consider a role model. Why did you choose this person? BLkp6
Every people have a person who encourages them to set goals in their life. Such as: one of their parents, brothers, sisters or another person. I have a person that always motivates me. She is my mother. She is a really kind, even-tempered, patient, simpering person. She has never regret her life and helps her children make decisions. I love my mother. She is a symbol of a patient person Although she fails a lot, she goes on living without sympathy for her motion. She catches house chores, education of her children, in addition she is the best cook. She puts up with life's ups and downs. She is motivator. To tell the truth, whenever I look at my mother, I find strong motivation. First of all she controls a nurture of her children, cooks everything inspire of complicated because of us. She is abedient to her husband and clever enough for us She has done some jobs in her life. For example, nurse, protector, tsilorand etcedura. To sum up, our mothers are the best person in our life and the best motivator at all times
Every
people
have a
person
who encourages them to set goals in their
life
. Such as: one of their parents, brothers, sisters or another
person
. I have a
person
that always motivates me. She is my
mother
. She is a
really
kind, even-tempered, patient, simpering
person
.
She
has never
regret
her
life
and
helps
her children
make
decisions. I
love
my
mother
. She is a symbol of a patient
person
Although she fails a lot, she goes on living without sympathy for her motion. She catches
house
chores, education of her children,
in addition
she is the best cook.
She
puts up with life's ups and downs.
She
is motivator. To
tell
the truth, whenever I look at my
mother
, I find strong motivation.
First of all
she controls a nurture of her children, cooks everything inspire of complicated
because
of us. She is
abedient
to her husband and clever
enough
for us She has done
some
jobs in her
life
.
For example
, nurse, protector,
tsilorand
etcedura
. To sum up, our mothers are the best
person
in our
life
and the best motivator at all
times
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IELTS essay Think of a person you consider a role model. Why did you choose this person?

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