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now a days people choose to be self employed rather than to work for a company

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Modern day economies allow such a made of employment is being self employed, which is dreamy for many people. However, many people still opt to employed rather being self employed, but also the draw backs that comes with it. First a fall, in many modern society; entrepreneurship is highly promote by motivator speaker in webinar, interview, workshop, etc. Which lead to most of people to encourage to be self employed and they start thinking of luxury life send being successful in life. people are also being said that there is no limit they also become wealthy as Steve jobs.
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IELTS essay now a days people choose to be self employed rather than to work for a company

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
99 words
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