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Think about your intelligences

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After 2 English periods, i learned about some intelligences and know I can know that what my intelligences are. There are Spatial and Intrapersonal. I think if I'm in spatial intelligence so I can do well some activities like drawing or learn from films and pictures, I like to doing jigsaw puzzles when I was a child and until now I still prefer to play it. I usually express my ideas with drawings or make some mind maps, because after I do it, I can improve or can show out all my ideas easily. For those who have that intelligence can do well at decorating their room or their house and me either, another ways to say is "my work space can affect my motivation". How about Intrapersonal intelligence? Yes, this intelligence may do well on spending lots of time alone, I means like being individual, I can do well something even without anyone's help. Read or learn about people psychological is sounds interesting right? And that's also what am I have fun or exciting on. In English class, some activities I like to do more are using Quizlet, play Kahoot and draw mindmap. That's all, but if you ask me what I want to do or what activities may improve my English skill can be make some mindmap cause when I learn some new word, I always make mindmap so I can remember those words well. Another ways to improve my English is use any website can help us learn vocab by playing game. I prefer to drawing instead of writing definitions of words (because when I see some picture I can remember well than see text definitions).
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are. There are Spatial and Intrapersonal. I
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if I'm in spatial
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intelligence
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from films and pictures, I like to doing jigsaw puzzles when I was a child and until
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mind maps,
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after I do it, I can
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or can
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show
out all my
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ideas
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can do
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at decorating their room or their
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and me either, another ways to say is
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my work space can affect my motivation
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. How about Intrapersonal
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? Yes, this
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may do
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on spending lots of time alone, I
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like being individual, I can do
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well
something even without anyone's
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help
. Read or
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learn
about
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psychological is sounds interesting right? And that's
also
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,
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activities I like to do more are using Quizlet, play Kahoot and draw
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cause when I
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new word, I always
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I can remember those words
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. Another ways to
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my English is
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any website can
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us
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vocab by playing game. I prefer to
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when I
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IELTS essay Think about your intelligences

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
279 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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