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Nature as an general topic

Nature as an general topic r67nL
In this session, I am discussing nature. God has given nature a gift for human life, therefore humans are responsible for caring for it. Various birds and animals are live with nature and always, they have been helping us. Nature is created by god. So many people have to love nature, which has been gifted by God. When getting early morning to night we have seen various types of nature and as well as we have been observing in all season.
In this session, I am discussing
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nature
. God has
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given
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nature
a gift for human life,
therefore
humans are responsible for caring for it. Various birds and animals are
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live
with
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nature
and always, they have been helping us.
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Nature
is created
by god.
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So
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many
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people
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have to
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love
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nature
, which has
been gifted
by God. When getting early morning to night we have
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seen
various types of
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nature
and
as well
as we have been observing in all season.
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IELTS essay Nature as an general topic

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
81 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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