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Favorite Canadian youth are laptops Mobifone Tablets Dropped desktops TVs and computers TV Canadians' hobbies over the years like when there was no television it was very popular in 2009 and has changed since then. changed a lot after 10 years, the number of users is not much anymore, the least used thing in 2009 is tablets and in 2019 Those are the most popular things in Canada, and Mobifone in 2009 usually rewards little effect but in 2019 then 27% should be used. , I can see that the population indexes change over the years such as laptops and Mobile phones increase many times and the number of people using laptop and Conventional TV pictures is not much anymore.

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