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Write a paragraph about employee benefits that you want to have

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Employee benefits are a tool used by businesses to attract potential applicants, improve employee satisfaction, reduce turnover and maintain competition. These employee benefits packages may include overtime, medical insurance, vacation, profit sharing, and retirement benefits, to name just a few. For a freshman like me, the most important benefit is flexible hours. As the fact that I still have to learn at school and the working time will completely depend on school schedule. So flexible hours will be easier for me to arrange time for both school and company, I can work without worrying about being late for school. I prefer working in the evening and I can also easily arrange to come in on Saturdays and Sundays. I said above, I am a freshman, so I put gaining experience first. Salary is also essential but at this time I don’t take it too seriously. However, I will try to work at my best to deserve the money I get paid.

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improve
 employee satisfaction, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviate
reduce
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 at this time I don’t take it too seriously
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