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They have to be honest I am

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First and foremost, in spite of the various merits of the movement of production and service sectors to the countryside, there are also a few disadvantages of it. Firstly, it will lead to unemployment in cities due to limited jobs in the urban areas. For example, transportation facilities and availability of resources and raw materials are less in these regional areas, production may be affected at some stages. Obviously, this paves the way for loss of revenue during the initial stages. Furthermore, the consumer base may not be as large as that in cities and towns which may even cause economic crisis to some industries at certain stages of development

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in spite of
 the various merits of the movement of production and service sectors to the countryside, there are also
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, it will lead to unemployment in cities due to limited jobs in the urban areas. For example
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affected
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some
 stages. Obviously
, this paves the way for loss of revenue during the initial stages. Furthermore
, the consumer base may not be as large as that in cities and towns which may even cause economic crisis to This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
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IELTS essay They have to be honest I am

Essay

American English

1 paragraphs

109 words

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4.0

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
Include an introduction and conclusion
Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 6.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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