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First and foremost, in spite of the various merits of the movement of production and service sectors to the countryside, there are also a few disadvantages of it. Firstly, it will lead to unemployment in cities due to limited jobs in the urban areas. For example, transportation facilities and availability of resources and raw materials are less in these regional areas, production may be affected at some stages. Obviously, this paves the way for loss of revenue during the initial stages. Furthermore, the consumer base may not be as large as that in cities and towns which may even cause economic crisis to some industries at certain stages of development

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in spite of
 the various merits of the movement of production and service sectors to the countryside, there are also
 a few disadvantages of it. Firstly
, it will lead to unemployment in cities due to limited jobs in the urban areas. For example
, transportation facilities and availability of resources and raw materials are less in these regional areas, production may be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :impacted
affected
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some
 stages. Obviously
, this paves the way for loss of revenue during the initial stages. Furthermore
, the consumer base may not be as large as that in cities and towns which may even cause economic crisis to This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 industries at certain stages of development