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These two articles are about digital advertising.

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These two articles are about digital advertising. The two articles contradicts each with the first article shedding some positive light one digital advertising and the second article showing negative public opinions about it. In the first article, the writer talks about the importance of outdoor advertising and that digital advertising is a metamorphosis of it that is both cheaper and more exciting. I share the same view as the writer and believe that digital advertising has replaced outdoor marketing. With digital advertisements, there are endless possibilities of what can be displayed to the targeted consumers. Change could be done easily as it is programmable and with just a click of a mouse, another advertisement could be displayed. In the second article, there is criticism towards current digital advertisements. By comparing digital advertising to traditional outdoor advertising, the writer claims that digital advertising is much disturbing compared to its predecessor, which could be ignored easily. The writer has a point here, but I would like to point out that this is only held true for people who don’t find value in these advertisements. Sometimes, these advertisements introduce people to things they didn’t know exist and help them find the products they needed. Furthermore, digital advertising is friendlier to the environment as the media it displays on is reusable and repairable, unlike traditional posters that need to be reprinted time and time again which waste paper. In summary, these two reflects two sides of digital advertising. On one hand, it is a new and exciting method of advertisement; on the other hand, the facts it is bright and will remain permanently at a certain location could disturb some people
These two
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are about digital advertising. The two
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contradicts each with the
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shedding
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positive
light one digital advertising and the second
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article
showing
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negative
public opinions about it.

In the
first
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article
, the
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writer
talks about the importance of outdoor advertising and that digital advertising is a metamorphosis of it
that is
both cheaper and more exciting. I share the same view as the
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writer
and believe that digital advertising has replaced outdoor marketing. With digital
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advertisements
, there are endless possibilities of what can
be displayed
to the targeted consumers.
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Change
could
be done
easily
as it is programmable and with
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just
a click of a mouse, another
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advertisement
could
be displayed
.

In the second
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article
, there is criticism towards
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current
digital
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advertisements
. By comparing digital advertising to traditional outdoor advertising, the
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writer
claims that digital advertising is much disturbing compared to its predecessor, which could be
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ignored
easily
. The
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writer
has a point here,
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I would like to point out that this is
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only
held true for
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people
who don’t find value in these
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advertisements
.
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Sometimes
, these
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advertisements
introduce
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people
to things they didn’t know exist and
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help
them find the products they needed.
Furthermore
, digital advertising is friendlier to the environment as the media it displays on is reusable and repairable, unlike traditional posters that need to
be reprinted
time and time again which waste paper.

In summary,
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these two reflects
two sides of digital advertising. On one hand, it is a new and exciting method of
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advertisement
;
on the other hand
, the facts it is bright and will remain
permanently
at a certain location could disturb
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some
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people
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IELTS essay These two articles are about digital advertising.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
276 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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