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These seem to be an increasing trend towards assessing student through exams rather than continual assessment. What are the advantages and disadvantage of exams as a form of assessment? v.1

These seem to be an increasing trend towards assessing student through exams rather than continual assessment. What are the advantages and disadvantage of exams as a form of assessment? v. 1
There is a tendency for teachers to assess students by method for doing examinations instead of continual assessment. This essay will suggest that measuring students' ability is the biggest advantage of this and increased stress and pressure on students is the primary disadvantage. On the one hand, assessing students through exams bring people a few benefits. Firstly, assessing students by method for examination help teachers to assess exactly level ability of students. For instance, when students take an exam, and they are undertaken in the presence of supervisors thus, students could not cheat in the time doing exams. Moreover, in Vietnam, if students want to go abroad in developing countries, such as Canada, America, they have to pass some English certificate with good score. The second, examinations will promote competition among students. The score of the exams plays a vital role in assessing students. It helps students to work harder to improve their knowledge and natural skill. On the other hand, this trend has several drawbacks. Examinations bring students stress and pressure. When a student has to be faced with important exams, he will feel stress and pressure. To illustrate, a great deal of excellent student has achieved a low score because they are under pressure from their parents and teachers. The disadvantage of continuous assessment that is examinations are sometimes incorrect because students often tend to use the internet, therefore; it increases the risk of plagiarism. For example, when students plagiarize means that they are taking someone else's idea, and this lead until they may be being expulsion from going out school for this reason. In conclusion, assessing students through exams bring people pros and cons in assessing students' ability, and pressure, which students have to face when they carry out exams.
There is a tendency for teachers to assess
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students
by method for doing
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examinations
instead
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stress
and
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pressure
on
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students
is the primary disadvantage.

On the one hand,
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assessing
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students
through exams bring
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people
a few benefits.
Firstly
,
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assessing
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students
by method for
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examination
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help
teachers to assess exactly level ability of
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students
.
For instance
, when
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students
take an exam, and they are undertaken in the presence of supervisors
thus
,
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students
could not cheat in the time doing exams.
Moreover
, in Vietnam, if
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students
want to go abroad in
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developing countries
, such as Canada, America, they
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have to
pass
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some
English certificate with
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good
score. The second,
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examinations
will promote competition among
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students
. The score of the exams plays a vital role in
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assessing
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students
. It
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helps
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students
to work harder to
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improve
their knowledge and natural
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skill
.

On the other hand
, this trend has several drawbacks.
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Examinations
bring
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students
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stress
and
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pressure
. When a
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student
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has to
be faced
with
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important
exams, he will feel
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stress
and
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pressure
. To illustrate, a great deal of excellent
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student
has achieved a low score
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because
they are under
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pressure
from their parents and teachers. The disadvantage of continuous assessment
that is
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examinations
are
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sometimes
incorrect
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because
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students
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often
tend to
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use
the internet,
therefore
; it increases the
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risk
of plagiarism.
For example
, when
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students
plagiarize means that they are taking someone else's
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idea
, and this lead until they may be being expulsion from going out school
for this reason
.

In conclusion
,
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assessing
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students
through exams bring
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people
pros and cons in
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assessing
students' ability, and
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pressure
, which
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students
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have to
face when they carry out exams.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay These seem to be an increasing trend towards assessing student through exams rather than continual assessment. What are the advantages and disadvantage of exams as a form of assessment? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
293 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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