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There seems to be an increasing trend towards assessing students through exams rather than through continual assessment. What are the advantages and disadvantages of exams as a form of assessment? v.2

There seems to be an increasing trend towards assessing students through exams rather than through continual assessment. What are the advantages and disadvantages of exams as a form of assessment? v. 2
In modern times, the ıssue of assesment of students through exams has become highly controversial. There are those who say that students should be assessed by exams, however others believe that students should be assessed as continual appraisal. This essay will examine the positive aspects and drawbacks of this argument and provide my overall opinion. From an overall perspective; there are two key advantages of student appraisal through exams to provide exact appraisal conclusion and thoroughly objective exam evaluation. Perhaps the main advantage of this issue is that assessment through exam provide exact evaluate to ability or knowledge level of students. This is because examination conclusion assessed on the technological tools. A further point in favour of assessment with the exam is that prevent illegal reading skill and knowledge level and provide exact objective evaluate. For example, someone who examiner would be success himself kin or himself student or so do. Prevent the this case, assessment with exams is crucial. Despite these arguments, there are also various disadvantages to measure of skills of students through exams. The main disadvantage is that being more stressed on the student on the exam day. As a result, students could be depressive, stressful, nervous on that day and this case could be causing negative impacts to student and perhaps cause unsuccessful result. In conclusion, it must be said that appraisal through exam of students has clear advantages and disadvantages. Taking the above into account, it would appear that notably nowadays there are more advantages than disadvantages between making exam for student assessment and not making it.
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exams has become
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controversial. There are those who say that
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students
should
be assessed
by exams,
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students
should
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as continual
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appraisal
. This essay will examine the
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positive
aspects and drawbacks of this argument and
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provide
my
overall
opinion.

From an
overall
perspective; there are two key
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advantages
of
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student
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appraisal
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through
exams to
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provide
exact
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appraisal
conclusion and
thoroughly
objective exam evaluation. Perhaps the main
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advantage
of this issue is that
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assessment
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through
exam
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provide
exact evaluate to ability or knowledge level of
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students
. This is
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because
examination conclusion assessed on the technological tools. A
further
point in
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skill
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exact objective evaluate.
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student
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with exams is crucial.

Despite these arguments, there are
also
various disadvantages to measure of
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skills
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students
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through
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disadvantage
is that being more
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stressed
on the
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student
on the exam day.
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,
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students
could be depressive, stressful, nervous on that day and this case could be causing
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negative
impacts to
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student
and perhaps cause unsuccessful result.

In conclusion
, it
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be said
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appraisal
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through
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students
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clear
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advantages
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nowadays there are more
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advantages
than disadvantages between making exam for
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student
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assessment
and not making it.
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34Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay There seems to be an increasing trend towards assessing students through exams rather than through continual assessment. What are the advantages and disadvantages of exams as a form of assessment? v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
262 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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