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These days there is a significant growth in the requirement of physiotherapy by the people.

These days there is a significant growth in the requirement of physiotherapy by the people. 8G2X5

Now a days the Populace are showing good interest in going for physiotherapy rather than the medicated tablets, there by improving their physical strength along with their mental well being. Physiotherapy aims to improve muscle strength their by preventing early degeneration of bones and joints and also helps to educate people to exhibit proper body postures leading to elimination of the excess pressure on the musculature of the body

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IELTS essay These days there is a significant growth in the requirement of physiotherapy by the people.

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American English

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