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Some people says that cigrette smoking should be banned while others disagree. discuss both views

Some people says that cigrette smoking should be banned while others disagree. discuss both views o5Blq
IT HAS BEEN FEW YEARS SINCE THE PEOPLE WHO HAVE STARTED CONSUMING PRODUCTS INCLUSIVE OF TOBACCO. THERE ARE, SOME HOLD THE OPINION THAT SMOKING MUST BE PROHIBITED. TO ME, EVENTHOUGH, THE FOLLOWERS HAVE A FEW ARGUMENTS TO PROMOTE THIS NOTION, IT CANNOT BE JUSTIFIED. THIS ESSAY WILL EXAMINE THE REASONS IN DETAIL. TO COMMENCE WITH THE VALID ELEMENTS TO OPPOSE SMOKING, FIRSTLY, IT CAUSE NUMEROUS HEALTH PROBLEMS. TO ELABORATE, IT IS PROVEN BY A NUMBER OF STUDIES THAT HEART ATTACK, TUBERCULOSIS AND OTHER FATAL CONDITIONS COULD BE DEVELOPED SECONDARY TO THAT. ANOTHER FACTOR, WHICH LINK WITH THE PREVIOUS, IS THE SIDE EFFECTS YIELDS ON THE FAMILY OR OTHER SURROUNDING SOCIETAL MEMBERS. RATIONALLY, PASSIVE SMOKERS, PARTICULARLY, ADOLESCENTS HAVE 65% MORE CHANCES THAN THAT OF THE SMOKER TO DIE FROM LUNG CANCER AS PER THE WORLD HEALTH ORGANIZATION’S PUBLIC EDUCATION SUPPLIES. SIMILAR TO THAT, HAVING CIGRETTE IS ADMITTEDLY A BAD HABIT, WHICH COULD MAKE ONE FEEL OSTRACISED IN A GROUP. TO EXEMPLIFY, IF AN ORGANIZATION LOOK FOR THE EMPLOYEES, THEY WOULD DEFINITELY BE PRIORITISING ONE WITH ‘NO- BAD HABITS’. FURTHERMORE, TOBACCO PRODUCTS ARE REALLY EXPENSIVE. THE FAMILY MIGHT FACE A HUGE FINANCIAL CRISIS WHILE SPARING THE MOST INCOME TO BUY CIGRETTES. THE FACTOR OF SKY-ROCKETTING CRIME RATES, PECULIARLY FROM THE LOWER MIDDLE CLASS AND YOUNG POPULATION TO FIND RESOURCES TO MEET THE ‘CRAVING’ FOR THE ADDICTING SUPPLIES INCLUDING TOBACCO PRODUCTS, MUST NOT BE NEGLECTED. FOR INSTANCE, THEFT FOR BUING OTHERS, CONTRADICTORILY, ARE AGAINST BANNING TOBACCO, MIGHT BE CONSIDERING IT NOT ONLY AS A TRESPASS INTO THE LIBERTY OF SUCH CITIZENS BUT ALSO, THE UNEMPLOYMENT GENERATED WHEN IT GET BANNED. IT CAN, EVEN THEN, BE DISREGARDED, WHILE VALIDATING MY RATIONALES WITH IRREFUTABLE EVIDENCES. IN CONCLUSION, I COMPLETELY AGREE WITH THE NOTION OF PROHIBITTING SMOKING AS IT PAVE THE WAY FOR VARIOUS DETRIMENTAL EFFECTS IN THE SOCIETY.
IT HAS BEEN FEW YEARS SINCE THE
PEOPLE
WHO HAVE
STARTED
CONSUMING PRODUCTS INCLUSIVE OF
TOBACCO
. THERE ARE,
SOME
HOLD THE OPINION THAT SMOKING
MUST
BE PROHIBITED
. TO ME,
EVENTHOUGH
, THE FOLLOWERS HAVE A FEW ARGUMENTS TO PROMOTE THIS NOTION, IT CANNOT
BE JUSTIFIED
. THIS ESSAY WILL EXAMINE THE REASONS IN DETAIL.

TO COMMENCE WITH THE VALID ELEMENTS TO OPPOSE SMOKING,
FIRSTLY
, IT CAUSE NUMEROUS HEALTH PROBLEMS. TO ELABORATE, IT
IS PROVEN
BY A NUMBER OF STUDIES THAT HEART ATTACK, TUBERCULOSIS AND OTHER FATAL CONDITIONS COULD
BE DEVELOPED
SECONDARY TO THAT. ANOTHER FACTOR, WHICH LINK WITH THE PREVIOUS, IS THE SIDE EFFECTS YIELDS ON THE FAMILY OR OTHER SURROUNDING SOCIETAL MEMBERS.
RATIONALLY
, PASSIVE SMOKERS,
PARTICULARLY
, ADOLESCENTS HAVE 65% MORE CHANCES THAN THAT OF THE SMOKER TO
DIE
FROM LUNG CANCER AS PER THE WORLD HEALTH ORGANIZATION’S PUBLIC EDUCATION SUPPLIES. SIMILAR TO THAT, HAVING
CIGRETTE
IS
ADMITTEDLY
A
BAD
HABIT, WHICH COULD
MAKE
ONE FEEL
OSTRACISED
IN A GROUP. TO EXEMPLIFY, IF AN ORGANIZATION LOOK FOR THE EMPLOYEES, THEY WOULD DEFINITELY BE
PRIORITISING
ONE WITH ‘NO-
BAD
HABITS’.

FURTHERMORE
,
TOBACCO
PRODUCTS ARE
REALLY
EXPENSIVE. THE FAMILY MIGHT FACE A HUGE FINANCIAL CRISIS WHILE SPARING THE MOST INCOME TO
BUY
CIGRETTES
. THE FACTOR OF
SKY-ROCKETTING
CRIME RATES,
PECULIARLY
FROM THE LOWER MIDDLE
CLASS
AND YOUNG POPULATION TO FIND RESOURCES TO
MEET
THE ‘CRAVING’ FOR THE ADDICTING SUPPLIES INCLUDING
TOBACCO
PRODUCTS,
MUST
NOT
BE NEGLECTED
.
FOR INSTANCE
, THEFT FOR
BUING


OTHERS,
CONTRADICTORILY
, ARE AGAINST BANNING
TOBACCO
, MIGHT BE CONSIDERING IT NOT
ONLY
AS A TRESPASS INTO THE LIBERTY OF SUCH CITIZENS
BUT
ALSO
, THE UNEMPLOYMENT GENERATED WHEN IT
GET
BANNED. IT CAN, EVEN THEN,
BE DISREGARDED
, WHILE VALIDATING MY RATIONALES WITH IRREFUTABLE EVIDENCES.

IN CONCLUSION
, I COMPLETELY
AGREE
WITH THE NOTION OF
PROHIBITTING
SMOKING AS IT PAVE THE WAY FOR VARIOUS DETRIMENTAL EFFECTS IN THE SOCIETY.
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IELTS essay Some people says that cigrette smoking should be banned while others disagree. discuss both views

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  American English
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