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You just finished a course and borrowed a book from the teacher but couldn’t return it on time. You would like to return the book now.

You just finished a course and borrowed a book from the teacher but couldn’t return it on time. You would like to return the book now. ewLl7
Dear Dr. Shajarian, I am writing this letter to apologize to you for my late response concerning the vocabulary book which I borrowed from you last summer after completing my training courses. I really enjoyed reading this practical and comprehensive vocabulary book which assisted me to improve and develop my English knowledge and skills, particularly by utilizing its complex and practical phrases. I should mention that I spent last summer with my brother-in-law in Dubai and we exercised and practiced it together. Learning with each other helped and accelerated memorizing the considerable number of collocations and proverbs during just 90 days. After finishing my summer vacation, I left Dubai and arrived in my hometown, but unfortunately, I realized that the book had been left in Dubai. In this regard, I will return it to you as soon as possible when I have received it by post. In the end, I would like to appreciate you for all your kindness and understanding in accepting my late. Yours sincerely, Abasad Safari
Dear Dr.
Shajarian
,

I am writing this letter to apologize to you for my late response concerning the vocabulary book which I borrowed from you last summer after completing my training courses.

I
really
enjoyed reading this practical and comprehensive vocabulary book which assisted me to
improve
and develop my English knowledge and
skills
,
particularly
by utilizing its complex and practical phrases.

I
should mention that I spent last summer with my brother-in-law in
Dubai and
we exercised and practiced it together. Learning with each other
helped
and accelerated memorizing the considerable number of collocations and proverbs during
just
90 days.

After finishing my summer vacation, I
left
Dubai and arrived in my hometown,
but
unfortunately, I realized that the book had been
left
in Dubai.

In this regard, I will return it to you as
soon
as possible when I have received it by post. In the
end
, I would like to appreciate you for all your kindness and understanding in accepting my late.

Yours
sincerely
,

Abasad
Safari
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IELTS essay You just finished a course and borrowed a book from the teacher but couldn’t return it on time. You would like to return the book now.

Essay
  American English
8 paragraphs
168 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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