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These days, social media and the internet have become very important in many people's lives. What are some of advantages and disadvantages of this.

These days, social media and the internet have become very important in many people's lives. What are some of advantages and disadvantages of this. 5LNVQ
Using the internet and social media have become quite crucial these days, the internet and social media are a source of information, and they have a multitude of benefits for individuals as well as companies. Both are booming in various sectors. In this essay, I will elaborate on the merits and demerits of the internet network and social websites. Firstly, I will elucidate how this trend benefits everyone’s lives and secondly, I will discuss these negative trends. There are manifold advantages of uses of the internet mode as well as social media like WhatsApp, Twitter, Youtube and many more. To commence with, online classes has been feasible by the internet all over the world. These classes are becoming common among the young, and even children. Due to LockDown, these beleaguered times when inhabitants move towards more technology along with the internet as well as social websites; they can save not only money but also time. Moreover, multinational companies were also run almost their business through the work from home and support of the internet; their employees safe against by Covid-19 and similarly adhere to the guideline of the authorities. On the other hand, there are some drawbacks of this growing trend which extremely impact human health. To begin with, people are alluring towards the internet and social sites, owing to could be excessive use of that. Despite the fact that they have in an emergency, they use more social medial to post short videos clips. So, that their followers and fans could have increased. Hence, they may be become completely addicted, while feeling some pressure for creating few videos for their fans. Besides, few messes choose the other path for making money like hiking, fraud and many more. The tempting of the advertisement has been played in distinctive social sides, where some people become to be victims. To recapitulate, albeit there are tremendous advantages of the internet and social media which can vastly ameliorate in our own everyone’s lives. There are also some glitches, too. Creating many health issues because of dependence on high tech-savvy gadgets and devoid of workouts.
Using the internet and
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social
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media
have become quite crucial these days, the internet and
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social
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media
are a source of information, and they have a multitude of benefits for individuals
as well
as
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companies
. Both are booming in various sectors. In this essay, I will elaborate on the merits and demerits of the internet network and
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social
websites.
Firstly
, I will elucidate how this trend benefits everyone’s
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lives
and
secondly
, I will discuss these
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negative
trends.

There are manifold advantages of
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uses
of the internet mode
as well
as
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social
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media
like WhatsApp, Twitter,
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Youtube
and
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many
more. To commence with, online classes has been feasible by the internet all over the world. These classes are becoming common among the young, and even children. Due to LockDown, these beleaguered times when inhabitants
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move
towards more technology along with the internet
as well
as
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social
websites; they can save not
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only
money
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but
also
time.
Moreover
, multinational
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companies
were
also
run almost their business through the work from home and support of the internet; their employees safe against by Covid-19 and
similarly
adhere to the guideline of the authorities.

On the other hand
, there are
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some
drawbacks of this growing trend which
extremely
impact human health. To
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begin
with,
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people
are alluring towards the internet and
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social
sites, owing to could be excessive
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use
of that. Despite the fact that they have in an emergency, they
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use
more
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social
medial to post short videos clips.
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So
, that their followers and fans could have increased.
Hence
, they may
be become
completely addicted, while feeling
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some
pressure for creating few videos for their fans.
Besides
, few messes choose the other path for making money like hiking, fraud and
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many
more. The tempting of the advertisement has
been played
in distinctive
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social
sides, where
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some
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people
become to be victims.

To recapitulate, albeit there are tremendous advantages of the internet and
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social
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
media
which can
vastly
ameliorate in our
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own
everyone’s
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lives
. There are
also
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some
glitches, too. Creating
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many
health issues
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because
of dependence on high tech-savvy gadgets and devoid of workouts.
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IELTS essay These days, social media and the internet have become very important in many people's lives. What are some of advantages and disadvantages of this.

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