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Addiction called smoking

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In today's world, society has known that smoking is bad for their health. It damages mostly the lungs, throat and develops diseases like Asthma. However, since it is addictive, many cannot find the strength to let go of it when they start. To begin with, tobacco has an ingredient that causes addiction. It is called "nicotine" and it is the thing that causes all of the dangers. When a human body interacts with nicotine, it never stops craving this chemical. For example, it can be seen that the many teenagers that smoked once in their lives, become addicted to it so quickly and makes this a habit. Without a peaceful mind, it is extremely hard to quit once begin. Nevertheless, it is not impossible for people to kick this regular. There are telephone lines for people who are attracted by nicotine can get psychological assistance without any cost. In addition, there are communities that gather smokers in one place and help them pass over this with the support of their equals. Furthermore, bans that government makes are a truly amazing way to prevent the damages of tobacco to non-smokers too. It is observable that these bans can be expandable and without interfering with the legislative right to have a personal space, this can be the solution to reduce it in the nations. To conclude, the usage of tobacco damages everyone that lives together under the roof of a country. The number of humans that makes this a habit can be decreased by some governmental legislation and some supports from the loved ones or the communities.
In
today
's world, society has known that smoking is
bad
for their health. It damages
mostly
the lungs, throat and develops diseases like Asthma.
However
, since it is addictive,
many
cannot find the strength to
let
go of it when they
start
.

To
begin
with, tobacco has an ingredient that causes addiction. It
is called
"
nicotine
"
and it is the thing that causes
all of the
dangers
. When a human body interacts with nicotine, it never
stops
craving this chemical.
For example
, it can be
seen
that the
many
teenagers
that smoked once in their
lives
, become addicted to it
so
quickly
and
makes
this a habit. Without a peaceful mind, it is
extremely
hard
to quit once
begin
.

Nevertheless
, it is not impossible for
people
to kick this regular. There are telephone lines for
people
who
are attracted
by nicotine can
get
psychological assistance without any cost.
In addition
, there are communities that gather smokers in one place and
help
them pass over this with the support of their equals.
Furthermore
, bans that
government
makes
are a
truly
amazing way to
prevent
the damages of tobacco to non-smokers too. It is observable that these bans can be expandable and without interfering with the legislative right to have a personal space, this can be the solution to
reduce
it in the nations.

To conclude
, the usage of tobacco damages everyone that
lives
together under the roof of a country. The number of humans that
makes
this a habit can
be decreased
by
some
governmental legislation and
some
supports from the
loved
ones or the communities.
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IELTS essay Addiction called smoking

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
265 words
6.5
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