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In today's world, some prefer online courses whereas others prefer offline classroom teaching. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer amd include relevant examples

In today's world, some prefer online courses whereas others prefer offline classroom teaching. Give reasons for your answer amd include relevant examples Jq56a
As we all known to the fact about online classes especially diring this pandemic period but some of the folks think that offline studies are much better then the online ones whereas other's prefer the online ones. So before concluding anything, let us look at both the points. If we consider the online classes the first idea that hits our mind is the comfort of your home. Yes that's true the most weighting part of the online classes is the confort pf one's home. Secondly, you do not need to travel that means your time got saved, more time you have, more activities you can do. Thirdly, it also saves your money (travelling expenses). Fourthly, you do not need to get ready that means reduction in one more tension. Meanwhile, if we look at the other point that is offline classes the first thought knock to our mind is one to one intrection. Secondly, excitement to make new friends, to get involved in society, come to know about how to behave and interact with people. Thirdly, the classroom fun, to create memories including the funny and embarrassing ones. Fourthly, discussion with our teachers as its more efficient to make someone understand your point when having eye to eye contact. A special and important quality of group discussion occupies your soul on its own and that is without any additional cost and effort. To elucidate, online classes are good as those provide the comfort of your home as well as save your money and time whereas offline classes help you to develop some useful skills for life. So in my opinion, offline classes are better then online ones as education quality and some moral skills are immense then ones comfort
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diring
this pandemic period
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folks
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think
that offline studies are much
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whereas
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prefer the
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us look at both the points.

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we consider the
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the
first
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that hits our mind is the comfort of your home. Yes that's true the most weighting part of the
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is the
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pf one's home.
Secondly
, you do not need to travel that means your time
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saved, more time you have, more activities you can do.
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also
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, you do not need to
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ready that means reduction in one more tension.

Meanwhile, if we look at the other point
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offline
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.
Secondly
, excitement to
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new friends, to
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get
involved in society,
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to know about how to behave and interact with
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people
.
Thirdly
, the classroom fun, to create memories including the
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and embarrassing
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.
Fourthly
, discussion with our teachers as its more efficient to
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someone
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quality of group discussion occupies your soul on its
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without any additional cost and effort.

To elucidate,
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are
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as those provide the comfort of your home
as well
as
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save
your money and time whereas offline
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help
you to develop
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useful
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skills
for life.
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So
in my opinion, offline
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are
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as education quality and
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some
moral
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skills
are immense then
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IELTS essay In today's world, some prefer online courses whereas others prefer offline classroom teaching. Give reasons for your answer amd include relevant examples

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