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These days, people in some countries are living in a “throw-away” society which means people use things in a short time then throw them away. Causes and problems? v.5

We are living in 21st century era where plethoras of countries are influenced in throwaway culture which is gaining more popular than before. Due to which world is facing severe causes and problems which will be outlined in essay below. On the one hand, Cheap goods and products are nimbly available probably everywhere. As change in demand among people have skyrocketed drastically people purchase more products just to achieve self satisfaction and be in market or to be in the league which means the old goods are either thrown away or gets ended up being of no use. For instance kids purchase new toys and end up throwing the old one as demand changes time to time. Secondly as everything is now available online so called social media stars influence people to purchase products by offering them discounts. Many youth nowadays do not wait for special occasion to buy new clothes rather they would purchase new clothing every week which is hardly wearable only once or twice and later it is thrown away in the bin. I myself witnessed that, my brother changes her mobile phone every six months as an effect of prompts on television which is one of the useless things. However, this has lead to some serious consequence. Firstly if people used things for short period of time it directly affect the nature. Myriads of trees in the forest are chopped every year to make paper or plethora of other products just to meet people demand. As some products which cannot be reused are carried away in dump yard, Buried under the ground or ends throwing up in sea which has directly affected marine cycle. For instance in year 2020 may due to negligence of human being the ship containing of crude oil ended up getting wasted in the sea of Maldives which have completely destroyed the marine industry and tourism industry. There is no doubt that if we could not minimize then one day our resources might vanish out. Secondly uses of non-recyclable goods have been declining the quality of soil which could result in scarcity of food in the future. To recapitulate, The world is being materialistic day by day. Law enforcement agency should conduct a public awareness program as well as individuals must be a concern for this detrimental subject of the 21st century.
We are living in 21st century era where
plethoras
of countries
are influenced
in throwaway culture which is gaining more popular than
before
. Due to which world is facing severe causes and problems which will
be outlined
in essay below.

On the one hand,
Cheap
goods
and
products
are
nimbly
available
probably
everywhere. As
change
in demand among
people
have skyrocketed
drastically
people
purchase
more
products
just
to achieve
self satisfaction
and be in market or to be in the league which means the
old
goods
are either thrown away or
gets
ended up being of no
use
.
For instance
kids
purchase
new toys and
end
up throwing the
old
one as demand
changes
time to time.
Secondly
as everything is
now
available online
so called
social media stars influence
people
to
purchase
products
by offering them discounts.
Many
youth nowadays do not wait for special occasion to
buy
new clothes
rather
they would
purchase
new clothing every week which is hardly wearable
only
once or twice and later it
is thrown
away in the bin. I myself witnessed that, my brother
changes
her mobile phone every six months as an effect of prompts on television which is one of the useless things.

However
, this has lead to
some
serious consequence.
Firstly
if
people
used
things for short period of time it
directly
affect
the nature. Myriads of trees in the forest
are chopped
every year to
make
paper or plethora of other
products
just
to
meet
people
demand. As
some
products
which cannot
be reused
are carried
away in dump yard, Buried under the ground or ends throwing up in sea which has
directly
affected
marine cycle.
For instance
in year 2020 may due to negligence of human being the ship containing of crude oil ended up getting wasted in the sea
of Maldives
which have completely
destroyed
the marine industry and tourism industry. There is no doubt that if we could not minimize then one day our resources might vanish out.
Secondly
uses
of non-recyclable
goods
have been declining the quality of soil which could result in scarcity of food in the future.

To recapitulate, The world is being materialistic day by day. Law enforcement agency should conduct a public awareness program
as well
as individuals
must
be a concern for this detrimental subject of the 21st century.
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IELTS essay These days people In some countries are leaving in ‘Throw –away’ society which means people ise things in short time then throw them away. Discuss causes and problems.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
390 words
6.0
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