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- These days, people are producing more and more trash, and unfortunately the rate is increasing. In your opinion why do people produce more trash these days? What actions can we take in order to reduce the amount of trash that people produce?

- These days, people are producing more and more trash, and unfortunately the rate is increasing. In your opinion why do people produce more trash these days? What actions can we take in order to reduce the amount of trash that people produce? 7rQYy
Each family in the world produces a certain amount of rubbish everyday and the governments allocate a huge sum of money for collecting and dumping trash. Producing trash is inevitable however what looks unacceptable is that families these days are producing much more than they should and this is causing many problems for the people and the governments. The first reason why we produce so much rubbish is our modern lifestyle. These days we are consuming things which are packaged. Most of our garbage comes from packaging, we are consuming a lot of convenience food and we are throwing away lots of cans, bottles, and packages. We are also discarding many plastic bags and boxes used to carry things around. We are accustomed to using disposable products, we use them once and then we dispose of them. And unfortunately we forget that many of the things we try to get rid of are non-biodegradable and difficult to dispose of. Another reason is our interest in mass consumerism. In the modern world today many people consume more than they really need and therefore waste a lot which in turn results in the production of trash. In my opinion, the future generation must be aware of the consequences of this trend therefore they must be educated about the environment issues at school now. The governments must urge upon industry the importance of applying reusable packaging, such as glass bottles instead of plastic bottles. People must be informed of the damage to the environment caused by trash and encouraged to use recycled materials since most of the things that we consider as being trash can be used to produce other things. And finally I think People must learn not to waste anything. Unfortunately a considerable amount of the rubbish we produce comes from things we have wasted. To conclude, I think we cannot help producing trash and the earth and the ecosystem can take in only a certain amount of trash; therefore, people must reduce the amount of rubbish they produce before it is too late.
Each family in the world
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produces
a certain amount of
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rubbish
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everyday
and

the
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governments
allocate a huge sum of money for collecting and dumping

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trash
. Producing
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trash
is inevitable
however
what looks unacceptable is
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that


families these days are producing much more than they should and this is

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causing
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many
problems for the
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people
and the
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governments
.

The
first
reason why we
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produce
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so
much
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rubbish
is our modern lifestyle.

These days we are consuming things which
are packaged
. Most of
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our


garbage
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comes
from packaging, we are consuming
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a lot of
convenience food

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and
we are throwing away lots of cans, bottles, and packages. We are
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also


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discarding
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many
plastic bags and boxes
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used
to carry things around. We
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are


accustomed to using disposable products, we
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use
them
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once and
then we

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dispose
of them. And unfortunately we forget that
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many
of the things we try
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to


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get
rid of are non-biodegradable and difficult to dispose of. Another reason
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is


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our
interest in mass consumerism. In the modern world
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today
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many
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people


consume more than they
really
need and
therefore
waste a lot which in turn

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results
in the production of trash.

In my opinion, the future generation
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must
be aware of the consequences of

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this
trend
therefore
they
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must
be educated
about the environment issues at

school
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now
. The
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governments
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must
urge upon industry the importance
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of


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applying
reusable packaging, such as glass bottles
instead
of plastic bottles.

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People
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must
be informed
of the damage to the environment caused by trash

and encouraged to
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use
recycled materials since most of the things that we

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consider
as being
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trash
can be
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used
to
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produce
other things. And
finally
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I


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think
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People
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must
learn not to waste anything. Unfortunately a
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considerable


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amount
of the
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rubbish
we
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produce
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comes
from things we have wasted.

To conclude
, I
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think
we cannot
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help
producing
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trash
and the earth and the

ecosystem can take in
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only
a certain amount of
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trash
;
therefore
,
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people
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must


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reduce
the amount of
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rubbish
they
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produce
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before
it is too late.
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IELTS essay - These days, people are producing more and more trash, and unfortunately the rate is increasing. In your opinion why do people produce more trash these days? What actions can we take in order to reduce the amount of trash that people produce?

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  American English
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