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A lot of children these days start working quite early write after their scholling pursue corresponding education .do you think it is positive or negative trend ?

A lot of children these days start working quite early write after their scholling pursue corresponding education. do you think it is positive or negative trend? BM1q5

Career is undoubtedly indispensible to establish in order to lead a prosperous life. Nowdays plenty of have initiated with their employment in tender age after with irregular study. Nonetheless, I believe this wellwether is a unworthy trend along with its justifications will be elucidated of my standpoint in upcoming paragraphs. Although, acquiring job is important there have been multifarious rationals reckoned to be negative due to abundant of burden on children. To elaborate this, the significants of life like psychological and social development make it hamper which is not provide ease to people. To exemplify, it is observed by expertees that 15%children prefer employment over their education which make obstacle for their entire growth. Thus, students who start working in their early age undergoes a lot of pressure. Futhermore, another cogent cause which justifies the scenario of correspondence study would make barrier to decide a permanent stream. To explain, even though obtain job is helpful for long term experience, still it would not only effect students work productivity but their future also. To cite an example, there are number of streams that require practical work which is difficult due to irregular education. Therefore, if children start work in their tendor age, it would be complicated for themselves to balance both their fields. Conclusively, inconsideration to above articulate it is ostensible that owing to the deviation from stream and earlier burden in tender age bellwether of working with irregular education is negative in nature.

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 working in their early You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyouthmaturitylifeold age
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 students work productivity This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
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 their future also
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, it would be complicated
 for themselves to balance both their fields. Conclusively
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 bellwether of working with irregular education is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:adverse
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