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These days, many people have their own computer and telephone, so it is quite easy for them to do their job at home.

These days, many people have their own computer and telephone, so it is quite easy for them to do their job at home. g8PmD
Nowadays, technology is evolving day by day. These convenience are of great help to people and people do their works at home using phones and computers. That is allows people to make money sitting at home and also finding time for other household chores. But people get lazy at home. Spending a lot of time on a computer and phone is bad for your health. Now is the time when technology is advanced and it is creating great conveniences for people. As an example, making money sitting at home and doing works on computer and phones. These amenities are definitely good. Because people can do work at home and find time for other things as well. And find time for their family as well. Nowadays, modern jobs are on the rise and people are making a lot of money sitting at home. For example, it and smm work. If you have a computer or a phone to run this work and you can make good money sitting at home. However, there are many disadvantages to using computer and gadgets to work sitting at home. Many people are too lazy to sit at home and as a result, they suffer from many diseases. As an example, eyes problem, abnormal growth of the spine, and many other similar diseases. Sometimes people are left alone because they work at home for a while, and their worldview about the environment is declining. Of course everything has its limits. Well, it is great to make money sitting at home. But there is a limit to everything, and there are also disadvantages to working with a computer sitting at home. Everything will be fine if we do everything with a limit
Nowadays, technology is evolving day by day.
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IELTS essay These days, many people have their own computer and telephone, so it is quite easy for them to do their job at home.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
284 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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