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These days, it can be noticed that the world’s resources consumption is increasing dramatically, leading to the fact that natural resources are being over exploited at an alarming rate.

These days, it can be noticed that the world’s resources consumption is increasing dramatically, leading to the fact that natural resources are being over exploited at an alarming rate. 2xlOX
These days, it can be noticed that the world’s resources consumption is increasing dramatically, leading to the fact that natural resources are being over exploited at an alarming rate. In this essay, I will suggest several reasons of this problem, and in my opinion a number of measures should be implemented to address it. On the one hand, there are two reasons that could explain this problem. Firstly, the number of people is growing day by day with the result that environmental resources do not have enough to provide people’s needs. To illustrate, a survey shows the result that more than 60% of the water amount on the earth is consumed annually. Moreover, the use of non-renewable energy sources such as fossil fuels to support their daily life is also increasing. People use it for many purposes because they thought it more convenient as well as cheaper than other energy. Hence, one of the main reasons affecting the environment in particular and the earth in general is overpopulation. On the other hand, we still have a chance to correct the problem we made even though it is very hard to completely improve. First solution is government action; additionally; they must raise citizen’s awareness about the importance of protecting our planet. Some small and easy activities such as using eco-friendly products made by paper, bamboo and so on instead of plastic or disposable products. Furthermore, these eco products also can be recycled multiple times and safer. On top of that, gardening is another method which people should plant more trees to not only improve their respiratory systems but also reduce pollution levels. These actions seem like nothing but many people make it possible to support our planet. To conclude, this issue is causing by many factors and there are a number of feasible solutions to solve it; on top of that; people could do more movements than those I have listed.
These days, it can
be noticed
that the world’s resources consumption is increasing
dramatically
, leading to the fact that natural resources are being over exploited at an alarming rate. In this essay, I will suggest several reasons of this problem, and in my opinion a number of measures should
be implemented
to address it.

On the one hand, there are two reasons that could
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explain
this problem.
Firstly
, the number of
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people
is growing day by day with the result that environmental resources do not have
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enough
to provide
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people’s
needs. To illustrate, a survey
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shows
the result that more than 60% of the water amount on the earth
is consumed
annually
.
Moreover
, the
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use
of non-renewable energy sources such as fossil fuels to support their daily life is
also
increasing.
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People
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use
it for
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many
purposes
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because
they
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thought
it more convenient
as well
as cheaper than other energy.
Hence
, one of the main reasons affecting the environment
in particular
and the earth
in general
is overpopulation.

On the other hand
, we
still
have a chance to correct the problem we made
even though
it is
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very
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hard
to completely
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improve
.
First
solution is
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government
action;
additionally
; they
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must
raise citizen’s awareness about the importance of protecting our planet.
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Some
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small
and easy activities such as using eco-friendly products made by paper, bamboo and
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so
on
instead
of plastic or disposable products.
Furthermore
, these
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eco
products
also
can
be recycled
multiple times and safer.
On top of that
, gardening is another method which
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people
should plant more trees to not
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only
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improve
their respiratory systems
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but
also
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reduce
pollution levels. These actions seem like nothing
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but
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many
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people
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make
it possible to support our planet.

To conclude
, this issue is causing by
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many
factors and there are a number of feasible solutions to solve it;
on top of that
;
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people
could do more movements than those I have listed.
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IELTS essay These days, it can be noticed that the world’s resources consumption is increasing dramatically, leading to the fact that natural resources are being over exploited at an alarming rate.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
320 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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