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These days, Internet becomes a place where people can find information about something.

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These days, the Internet becomes a place where people can find information about something. There is no doubt that reading or listening to news provides a wealth of knowledge about real-world activities. In this essay, there are predominantly two contrasting views where a section of society vehemently deems that pupils should read newspapers in schools while others emphasize that it would be a waste of valuable teaching time.
These days, the Internet becomes a place where
people
can find information about something. There is no doubt that reading or listening to news provides a wealth of knowledge about real-world activities. In this essay, there are
predominantly
two contrasting views where a section of society
vehemently
deems that pupils should read newspapers in schools while others emphasize that it would be a waste of valuable teaching time.
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IELTS essay These days, Internet becomes a place where people can find information about something.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
68 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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