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These days exposure to television and internet is having bad influence on children.

These days exposure to television and internet is having bad influence on children. WEBnq

TV is a bad influence on kids, because children who watch more TV are more likely to be overweight. For example, researchers Klesges, Shelton found that while watching television, the metabolic rate is slower than when just resting. This implies that an individual would burn fewer calories by watching television than when simply sitting silently, doing nothing. Secondly, watching television at an young age affect children's brain development. The American Academy of pediatrics is worried about the effect of customizing television for kids younger than age two. Thirdly, television is full of commercials that show risky behaviors that can affect children's actions. Liquor ads on television have really expanded throughout the most recent years and more underage children are presented them with any other time of history.

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