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These days countries fewer and fewer people want to people become teachers in secondary school

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In modern era, mostly people want to become teachers in high school. This essay will discus problem and solution. To commence with, its many reasons individual prefer secondary school. on the other hand, high school provide many benefit for people because high school give better salary to people. hence government school give good opportunity to teachers. Furthermore, that problem solved by government. To explicate it, law maker provide good service to private school. so people mostly prefer to private school. because provide good salary for teacher so some people cannot prefer. thus, law maker is a main because it is solved that problem of teachersTo conculsion tutor mostly prefer to high school because government school provide good service to teacher.
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high
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school
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secondary
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.
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on
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school
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provide
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people
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high
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school
give better salary to
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people
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hence
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government
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school
give
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teachers
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government
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service to private
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school
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because
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government
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IELTS essay These days countries fewer and fewer people want to people become teachers in secondary school

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
120 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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