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These days commerce some buildings have open designs rather than different rooms. This trend has various reasons, benefits are more than their drawbacks. I will discuss them in the upcoming paragraphs.

These days commerce some buildings have open designs rather than different rooms. This trend has various reasons, benefits are more than their drawbacks. I will discuss them in the upcoming paragraphs. b32P3
Embark, open designs offices have various advantages. Firstly, new trend is cost effective people have no invested their money on constructing a separate room to each employee or workers. Even separate room needs a separate amenities such as infrastructure camera and Furniture. There For open space helps to save money by providing all facilities at one place. Secondly it provides and interactive environment among people at the work situation. The can discuss about difficulties which day says during time and can also do such things which leads the profit to the company. However, considering the negative side of that disturbance occurs a lot in such kind of offices. To illustrate in calling areas if the office follows the open space design then while calling workers got distracted from each other. In such officers separate room are appropriate to devote the potential of focus full stop as according to work we can construct the office building. In conclusion, there is no doubt advantages of open space design offices over leading the disadvantages of this.
Embark,
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open
designs
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offices
have various advantages.
Firstly
, new trend
is cost
effective
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people
have no invested their money on constructing a
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separate
room to each employee or workers. Even
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separate
room needs a
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separate
Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "amenity"?
amenities
such as infrastructure camera and Furniture. There For
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open
space
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helps
to save money by providing all facilities at one place.
Secondly
it provides and interactive environment among
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people
at the work situation. The can
Did you mean simply "discuss difficulties"? You do not need the word "about" here.
discuss about difficulties
which day says during time and can
also
do such things which leads the profit to the
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company
.

However
, considering the
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negative
side of that disturbance occurs a lot in such kind of
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offices
. To illustrate in calling areas if the
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office
follows the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
open
space design then while calling workers
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
distracted from each other. In such officers
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
separate
room are appropriate to devote the potential of focus full
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stop
as according to work we can construct the
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office
building.

In conclusion
, there is no doubt advantages of
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open
space design
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
offices
over leading the disadvantages of this.
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IELTS essay These days commerce some buildings have open designs rather than different rooms. This trend has various reasons, benefits are more than their drawbacks. I will discuss them in the upcoming paragraphs.

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
173 words
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