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In today's society, more and more work is done by machines.

In today's society, more and more work is done by machines. 0aw5Q
In contemporary world, an increasing amount of works are performed by machineries. As an intelligent inhabitants of this planet, us, human beings thrive to discover new things around us to understand more about our world. Over time, as we progressed a lot and after the creation of civilization, we fathomed that human physical power itself is not adequate to develop, so human intellect surpassed the human physical power to advance. Machines which facilitate our lives in almost every aspect of life are devised by human kind. Nowadays, nearly all of the jobs are automated and some completely operated by machines. To give a special example, we can tell the a great usage of heavy machineries in construction, such as bulldozers, excavators, etc. Machines are very functional and useful appliances. Necessity of people are being worked in other crucial areas of life, made the machines indispensable for our lives. Because we are in cutthroat competition with world, human intelligence and power is needed in most newly created jobs. Principle goal of humanity is to uncover the mysteries of our universe. However, there is a negative side to a replacement of humans. Not all people are mentally suitable to the jobs of today. Different people are capable of various things. Physical work required jobs are eliminated gradually, so majority of people from diverse countries will end up unemployed. Because people performs much slower than machines, the replacement of humans with machines is inevitable in the near future. One of the areas that people mostly supplanted by appliances is hospital. New high-end medical equipments are invented which slowly replace doctors. To sum up, despite the machines can not be fully operated by themselves, and human regulation and interference is needed, still they are the best assistant of people in this puzzling world.
In contemporary
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, an increasing amount of works
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machineries
. As an intelligent
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inhabitants
of this planet, us,
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human
beings thrive to discover new things around us to understand more about our
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world
. Over time, as we progressed a lot and after the creation of civilization, we fathomed that
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human
physical power itself is not adequate to develop,
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so
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human
intellect surpassed the
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human
physical power to advance.
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Machines
which facilitate our
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lives
in almost every aspect of life
are devised
by
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human
kind. Nowadays,
nearly
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all of the
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jobs
are automated
and
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some
completely operated by
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machines
. To give a special example, we can
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machineries
in construction, such as bulldozers, excavators, etc.
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are
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functional and useful appliances. Necessity of
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people
are
being worked
in other crucial areas of life, made the
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machines
indispensable for our
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lives
.
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Because
we are in cutthroat competition with
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world
,
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human
intelligence and power
is needed
in most
newly
created
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jobs
.
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goal of humanity is to uncover the mysteries of our universe.
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, there is a
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negative
side to a replacement of
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humans
. Not all
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people
are mentally suitable to the
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jobs
of
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today
.
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people
are capable of various things. Physical work required
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jobs
are eliminated
gradually
,
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majority of
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people
from diverse countries will
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end
up unemployed.
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people
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performs
much slower than
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machines
, the replacement of
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humans
with
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machines
is inevitable in the near future. One of the areas that
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people
mostly
supplanted by appliances is hospital. New high-
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end
medical equipments
are invented
which
slowly
replace doctors. To sum up, despite the
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machines
can not be
fully
operated by themselves, and
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human
regulation and interference
is needed
,
still
they are the best assistant of
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people
in this puzzling
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world
.
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IELTS essay In today's society, more and more work is done by machines.

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