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these day people in some countries are living in a throw-away society

these day people in some countries are living in a throw-away society xaxn6
In the present age, the overproduction and overconsumption of people lead to some serious problems consistent with the definition of “throw-away” society, where people tend to throw-away their old items though they still work and purchase the newest version of those things. In the meantime whether it is good or bad has sparked a heated debate. I believe that follow “throw-away” way to live plays both advantage and disadvantage On the one hand, “throw-away” society is advantageous and appropriate for most people nowadays, especially the young generation. People find it easy to change the style and flexible in the trending thing when owning the latest version of something. Living in the technology era means that they always have the opportunity to update and upgrade individual objects following the uptrend so that they tend to be easier to assimilate with the community. Beside that, there are a lot of things which are better to use in the short term, even just 1 time. Since Covid-19 pandemic spread all over the world, mask being a unseperate object, and it just make efficient when being a disposable products. If we still keep masks for a long time, there will be more bacteria approaching us, which accidentally makes our health worse. On the other hand, following a throw-away lifestyle can bring harmful effects on people. People tend to waste too much money on the newest thing though the old one is still in good condition and perfectly functional to stand up for the majority. For instance, more and more Iphone 13 are bought with the price to replace the Iphone 12 and Iphone 12 Pro Max even in fact, there is no dissimilarity between both of them without the color of shell. So this lifestyle can be a prodigality and make a dent in our finances, even lead to serious debt. Moreover, throw-away societies have a detrimental effect on the environment since increasing solid waste generation wastes. Not only do it damage our health because of the dense pollution but also harm the view of public places or our living spaces. In conclusion, being a ‘throw-away’ resident has been a heated topic for people, with its both merits and demerits, whether they find it fit or not. The world has changed, society too, whether this definition is appropriate to all of us?
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people
lead to
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serious problems consistent with the definition of “throw-away”
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society
, where
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people
tend to throw-away their
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old
items though they
still
work and
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purchase
the newest version of those things. In the meantime whether it is
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good
or
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bad
has sparked a heated debate. I believe that follow “throw-away” way to
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live
plays both advantage and
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disadvantage


On the one hand, “throw-away”
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society
is advantageous and appropriate for most
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people
nowadays,
especially
the young generation.
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People
find it easy to
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change
the style and flexible in the trending thing when owning the latest version of something. Living in the technology era means that they always have the opportunity to update and upgrade individual objects following the uptrend
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so
that they tend to be easier to assimilate with the community. Beside that, there are
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a lot of
things which are better to
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use
in the short term, even
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just
1 time. Since Covid-19 pandemic spread all over the world, mask being
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a
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unseperate
object, and it
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just
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efficient when being a disposable
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products
. If we
still
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keep
masks for a long time, there will be more bacteria approaching us, which
accidentally
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makes
our health worse.

On the other hand
, following a throw-away lifestyle can bring harmful effects on
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people
.
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People
tend to waste too much money on the newest thing though the
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old
one is
still
in
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good
condition and
perfectly
functional to stand up for the majority.
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Iphone
13 are
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with the price to replace the
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12 and
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12 Pro Max even in fact, there is no dissimilarity between both of them without the color of shell.
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So
this lifestyle can be a prodigality and
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make
a dent in our finances, even lead to serious debt.
Moreover
, throw-away
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societies
have a detrimental effect on the environment since increasing solid waste generation wastes. Not
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only
do it damage our health
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because
of the dense pollution
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also
harm the view of public places or our living spaces.

In conclusion
, being a ‘throw-away’ resident has been a heated topic for
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people
, with its both merits and demerits, whether they find it fit or not. The world has
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changed
,
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society
too, whether this definition is appropriate to all of us?
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IELTS essay these day people in some countries are living in a throw-away society

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388 words
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