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It’s interesting to observe cats’ behaviors and know the meanings

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It’s interesting to observe cats’ behaviors and know the meanings. First of all, cats spend a great deal of time grooming. It not only keeps the cats looking good with shine and clean further but also helps insulate their bodies and keeps them warm. Secondly, you can see your cats kneading many times but instead of dough they use a pillow, carpet, your head or chest. Experts are not certain why the cats behave this way. Some believe it is residual behavior from nursing as a kitten, or simply a way to show contentment (petsbest. com). Other cats’ behavior is that they like climbing to higher places, especially trees. This behavior is genetic since cats are natural predators. A higher point gives them a better view so it is more convenient to hunt. Moreover, they climb when feeling threatened or just for fun because they are playful and curious. Those are some of the most common cats’ behaviors but each cat has other special behaviors so pay attention to your cats to understand them.
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, cats spend a great deal of time grooming. It not
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your cats kneading
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a pillow, carpet, your head or chest. Experts are not certain why the cats behave this way.
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believe it is residual
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from nursing as a kitten, or
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a way to
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show
contentment (
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. com). Other cats’
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is that they like climbing to higher places,
especially
trees. This
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behavior
is genetic since cats are natural predators. A higher point gives them a better view
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so
it is more convenient to hunt.
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, they climb when feeling threatened or
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just
for fun
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because
they are playful and curious. Those are
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of the most common cats’
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behaviors
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but
each cat has other special
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pay attention to your cats to understand them.
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IELTS essay It’s interesting to observe cats’ behaviors and know the meanings

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  American English
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