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there should be some strict controls about noise

there should be some strict controls about noise AwNb1

On the other hand, I side with those who argue that noise should be kept under close supervision. Firstly, noise has a legion of harmful public health consequences. Sounds that are both powerful and lengthy may interrupt the thoughts and sleep of people in a residential area. This disturbance can have a negative impact on rest time and mood, resulting in weariness and tension. Secondly, noise impairs productivity at work. Many occupations need intense focus and relative vicinity quietness. For example, it is difficult for a musician to compose when surrounded by a large number of irrelevant sounds.

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 occupations need intense focus and relative vicinity quietness. For example
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