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there should be some strict controls about noise

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On the other hand, I side with those who argue that noise should be kept under close supervision. Firstly, noise has a legion of harmful public health consequences. Sounds that are both powerful and lengthy may interrupt the thoughts and sleep of people in a residential area. This disturbance can have a negative impact on rest time and mood, resulting in weariness and tension. Secondly, noise impairs productivity at work. Many occupations need intense focus and relative vicinity quietness. For example, it is difficult for a musician to compose when surrounded by a large number of irrelevant sounds.
On the other hand
, I side with those who argue that noise should be
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kept
under close supervision.
Firstly
, noise has a legion of harmful public health consequences. Sounds that are both powerful and lengthy may interrupt the thoughts and sleep of
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people
in a residential area. This disturbance can have a
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negative
impact on rest time and mood, resulting in weariness and tension.
Secondly
, noise impairs productivity at work.
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Many
occupations need intense focus and relative vicinity quietness.
For example
, it is difficult for a musician to compose when surrounded by
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a large number of
irrelevant sounds.
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IELTS essay there should be some strict controls about noise

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
98 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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