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Sometimes argued that it is a must for children that distinguish between right and wrong, at a younger age.Aand punishment is one of the best way to nurture them.

Sometimes argued that it is a must for children that distinguish between right and wrong, at a younger age. Aand punishment is one of the best way to nurture them. jVO38
No matter how old your children are, they often mimic their parents behavior. Therefore, if they make a mistake or do a behavior that you can not stand it, you should seek inside yours and ask yourself what did I do. Punishment might work fast to stop bad behavior, but it is not effective over time. And it can damage children's mental and physical health. Although corporal punishment is not a functional way, there are many ways to teach them. For example, we can talk to them about true and false, sanction them from what they admire.
No matter how
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your children are, they
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mimic their parents behavior.
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, if they
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a mistake or do a behavior that you can not stand it, you should seek inside yours and ask yourself what did I do. Punishment might work
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behavior,
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it is not effective over time. And it can damage children's mental and physical health. Although corporal punishment is not a functional way, there are
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ways to teach them.
For example
, we can talk to them about true and false, sanction them from what they admire.
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IELTS essay Sometimes argued that it is a must for children that distinguish between right and wrong, at a younger age. Aand punishment is one of the best way to nurture them.

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