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There should be no school homework agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, majority of institutes believe that no school homework is require for students at home. However, number of people argue that this is not beneficial for pupils for their growth towards studies and understanding of subjects. Bur I totally disagree about these and I completely believe that student homework is necessary for their development. In this essay I will give so many points regarding this matter. To begin with, home lesson is given by responsible teachers to their students for achieve extra knowledge about that particular topic. Furthermore it helps students to remember that topic long time. By just giving lesson in school or just introducing topic or elaborating topic to pupils won’t work for low marking students, they need more practice to achieve certain goal. For example, homework helps to develop certain skills like to develop my mind toward one point and it helps me to solve math equation easily. In addition, there are also many other benefits of homework. Firstly, without work at home students just spend their time while playing games, watching their favourite tv shows or movies and it will lead to poor development in studies. Secondly, without work pupils forget about the lesson that they did in institutes so repetition is require for better learning. On the other hand, There are also some downside of homework that is homework given by professor is too much and students who are doing their part-time work won’t manage to do it. Also students don’t get enough time for enjoyment and physical fitness. In conclusion, it is clear that even though homework becomes sometime hectic for students but it is necessary for their development and future.
Nowadays,
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majority of
institutes believe that no school
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homework
is
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require
for
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students
at home.
However
, number of
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people
argue that this is not beneficial for pupils for their growth towards studies and understanding of subjects. Bur I
totally
disagree about these and I completely believe that
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student
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homework
is necessary for their development. In this essay I will give
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so
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many
points regarding this matter.

To
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begin
with, home lesson is
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given
by responsible teachers to their
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students
for achieve extra knowledge about that particular
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topic
.
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Furthermore
it
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helps
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students
to remember that
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topic
long time. By
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just
giving lesson in school or
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just
introducing
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topic
or elaborating
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topic
to pupils won’t
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work
for low marking
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students
, they need more practice to achieve certain goal.
For example
,
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homework
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helps
to develop certain
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skills
like to develop my mind toward one point and it
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helps
me to solve math equation
easily
.

In addition
, there are
also
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many
other benefits of
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homework
.
Firstly
, without
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work
at home
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students
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just
spend their time while playing games, watching their
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tv
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shows
or movies and it will lead to poor development in studies.
Secondly
, without
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work
pupils forget about the lesson that they did in institutes
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so
repetition is
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require
for better learning.

On the other hand
, There are
also
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some
downside of
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homework
that is
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homework
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given
by professor is too much and
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students
who are doing their part-time
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work
won’t manage to do it.
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Also
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students
don’t
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get
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enough
time for enjoyment and physical fitness.

In conclusion
, it is
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clear
that
even though
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homework
becomes sometime hectic for
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students
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but
it is necessary for their development and future.
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IELTS essay There should be no school homework agree or disagree?

Essay
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5 paragraphs
277 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
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