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There seems to be an increasing trend towards assessing students through exams rather than through continual assessment. What are the advantages and disadvantages of exams as a form of assessment? v.9

There seems to be an increasing trend towards assessing students through exams rather than through continual assessment. What are the advantages and disadvantages of exams as a form of assessment? v. 9
Nowadays, exam tradition is rapidly growing up when the continual assessment method is demolished. However, children can be noticed, their mistakes of study and they can earn the confidence from giving exams which are beneficial, as well as there are some problems as well. Firstly, one benefit of examination trend is children can noticed their mistakes of learning. In other words, they can analyse their mistakes they had done, Consequently, pupils can be practice these mistakes and then prepared more strongly rather than the previous time. Secondly, Children can earn the confidence from their examination. In other words, they can do well in the exam and earn the courage which is vital for their upcoming future battle. For example, a similar question can come in the next examination and children can easily answer the question because of the courage. Moreover, these benefits are crucial for the challenging destiny of any children. On the other hand, one problem of going through assessment more than continual estimate is lack of knowledge. Furthermore, without continual judgment, children cannot earn the knowledge for sit on the review. Therefore, children cannot do well on the experiment and for that reason they are going to gain a lower score in the exam and that is a bad news for the upcoming destiny of students. Another issue is that, children can face some health problem issues. For instance, kids are going to do the study a lot before the experiment and they had to do that for la huge times, as a result, their fitness is going to lose some energy which is so much harmful for fitness. In short, fitness and outlook issues are included as problems of going through research rather than continual judgment. In conclusion, children can be beneficial for going through the research before continual assessment when they can face health and upcoming outlook issues as well. Because they can earn confidence and learn mistakes as well as face health drawbacks and future problems as well.
Nowadays, exam tradition is
rapidly
growing up when the
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continual
assessment method
is demolished
.
However
,
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children
can
be noticed
, their
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mistakes
of
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study and
they can
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earn
the confidence from giving exams which are beneficial, as
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well
as there are
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some
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problems
as well
.

Firstly
, one benefit of examination trend is
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children
can noticed their
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mistakes
of learning.
In other words
, they can
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analyse
their
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mistakes
they had done,
Consequently
, pupils can be practice these
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mistakes
and then prepared more
strongly
rather
than the previous time.
Secondly
,
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Children
can
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earn
the confidence from their examination.
In other words
, they can do
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well
in the exam and
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earn
the courage which is vital for their upcoming future battle.
For example
, a similar question can
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come
in the
next
examination and
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children
can
easily
answer the question
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because
of the courage.
Moreover
, these benefits are crucial for the challenging destiny of any children.

On the other hand
, one
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problem
of going through assessment more than
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continual
estimate is lack of knowledge.
Furthermore
, without
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continual
judgment,
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children
cannot
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earn
the knowledge for sit on the review.
Therefore
,
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children
cannot do
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well
on the experiment and for that reason they are going to gain a lower score in the exam and
that is
a
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bad
news for the upcoming destiny of students. Another
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issue
is that,
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children
can face
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some
health
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problem
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issues
.
For instance
, kids are going to do the study a lot
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before
the
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experiment and
they had to do that for la huge times,
as a result
, their fitness is going to lose
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some
energy which is
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so
much harmful for fitness. In short, fitness and outlook
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issues
are included
as
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problems
of going through research
rather
than
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continual
judgment.

In conclusion
,
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children
can be beneficial for going through the research
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before
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continual
assessment when they can face health and upcoming outlook
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issues
as
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well
.
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Because
they can
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earn
confidence and learn
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mistakes
as
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well
as face health drawbacks and future
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problems
as
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well
.
8.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8.5Mistakes

IELTS essay There seems to be an increasing trend towards assessing students through exams rather than through continual assessment. What are the advantages and disadvantages of exams as a form of assessment? v. 9

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
333 words
8.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
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