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Nowadays online education has become popular as more institutes and companies are offering courses online. However, many people prefer the traditional, classroom training or study. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of both methods. v.2

Nowadays online education has become popular as more institutes and companies are offering courses online. However, many people prefer the traditional, classroom training or study. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of both methods. v. 2
Education defines one’s character. Digital learning has become pre-dominantly common in today’s world because a high number of work and educational organizations are providing web tutorials. Despite of such situation, multiple individuals are opting classical methods of learning. This essay will analyse, the benefits and the drawbacks of online and classroom learning practices. Firstly, multiple online education platforms are emerging globally, and the number of e-learning programs are also growing proportionally. Digital learning is a boon in today’s competitive world as it gives privilege to learn at any time and at any location. Also, unlike traditional way, one can watch recorded classes any number of times. Although it possesses marvellous advantages it also comprised disadvantages. For instance, any question raised by individuals is not answered immediately as students are expected to send their queries via email or chat Overall, despite of comprising multiple pros, online education comes with multiple cons as well. On the other hand, traditional training programs still preserve their importance, though online education is growing dramatically. Moreover, the masses are more satisfied with live classes as their queries are resolved immediately. Furthermore, it is easy to learn practical concepts in a Physical class as one can have live demonstrations of experiments and concepts. However, limitations to traditional classes are, they may be of less interest to students as, some subjects, for example, statistics could have been better if they were on a graphical interface rather than on 2 dimensional text books. Hence, traditional teaching methods render both advantages and disadvantages. To conclude, education grooms’ individuals to be self-sufficient. This essay discussed advantages and disadvantages of two common study practices, namely, online and classroom.
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learning
has become pre-
dominantly
common in
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today
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because
a high number of work and educational organizations are providing web tutorials.
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Despite of
such situation,
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multiple
individuals are opting classical methods of
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learning
. This essay will
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analyse
, the benefits and the drawbacks of
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online
and classroom
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learning
practices.

Firstly
,
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multiple
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online
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education
platforms are emerging globally, and the number of e-learning programs are
also
growing
proportionally
. Digital
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learning
is a boon in
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today
’s competitive world as it gives privilege to learn at any time and at any location.
Also
, unlike
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traditional
way, one can
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watch
recorded
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classes
any number of times.
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it possesses
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marvellous
advantages it
also
comprised disadvantages.
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expected
to
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send
their queries via email or chat
Overall
,
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despite of
comprising
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multiple
pros,
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online
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education
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comes
with
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multiple
cons
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.

On the other hand
,
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traditional
training programs
still
preserve their importance, though
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online
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education
is growing
dramatically
.
Moreover
, the masses are more satisfied with
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live
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classes
as their queries
are resolved
immediately.
Furthermore
, it is easy to learn practical concepts in a Physical
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class
as one can have
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live
demonstrations of experiments and concepts.
However
, limitations to
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traditional
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classes
are, they may be of less interest to students as,
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some
subjects,
for example
, statistics could have been better if they were on a graphical interface
rather
than on 2 dimensional text books.
Hence
,
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traditional
teaching methods render both advantages and disadvantages.

To conclude
,
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education
grooms’ individuals to be self-sufficient. This essay discussed advantages and disadvantages of two common study practices,
namely
,
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online
and classroom.
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8.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Nowadays online education has become popular as more institutes and companies are offering courses online. However, many people prefer the traditional, classroom training or study. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of both methods. v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
276 words
8.5
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