Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

There remains some disagreement whether the selling and production of GMF are essential in the world's population growth

There remains some disagreement whether the selling and production of GMF are essential in the world's population growth RREpG
Never before has the topic of food gained such widespread attention. There remains some disagreement whether the selling and production of GMF are essential in the world's population growth. From my perspective, I partially agree with this view because of the following reasons. Admittedly, it is apparent that applying genetically modified techniques to plants and animals resolves food shortages in recent years. In fact, today the number of people who suffer a lack of food are much more decreasing, compared to in the past when the technology was still undeveloped. Because GMF that have qualitative productivity, time-saving development will provide a range of food for people as many times as the traditional method. Therefore, it will gradually make starvation no longer in the world. However, there is not still recognized by WHO about GMF’s security on human health. Nowadays, the question whether it is safe or harmful for humans to consume genetically modified feedremains unanswered. If people are unfortunate to eat unoriginal products, they are likely to get a number of diseases such as cancer, reproductive disorders and so on. Milk from genetically modified cows in the US is a compelling example, it is found with the hormone IGF-1 which causes cancer in people body. As a result, although it helps community address the hungry problem, it is very necessary to consider using GMF for the purpose of human health. In conclusion, I reaffirm my position that GMF has a benefit in solving the global issue, but there are still a number of problems in this method, especially health. Therefore, nations around the world should join hands to make GMF more perfect in the future.
Never
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
has the topic of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
gained such widespread attention. There remains
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
disagreement whether the selling and production of GMF are essential in the world's population growth. From my perspective, I
partially
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agree
with this view
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
of the following reasons.

Admittedly
, it is apparent that applying
genetically
modified techniques to plants and animals resolves
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
shortages in recent years. In fact,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
today
the number of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
who suffer a lack of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
are much more decreasing, compared to in the past when the technology was
still
undeveloped.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Because
GMF that have qualitative productivity, time-saving development will provide a range of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
as
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
times as the traditional method.
Therefore
, it will
gradually
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
starvation no longer in the world.

However
, there is not
still
recognized by WHO about GMF’s security on human health. Nowadays,
Consider shortening this phrase to just "whether", or rephrase the sentence to avoid "the question".
the question whether
it is safe or harmful for humans to consume
genetically
modified
Possible spelling mistake found.
feedremains
unanswered. If
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
are unfortunate to eat unoriginal products, they are likely to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
a number of diseases such as cancer, reproductive disorders and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
on. Milk from
genetically
modified cows in the US is a compelling example, it
is found
with the hormone IGF-1 which causes cancer in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
body.
As a result
, although it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helps
community address the hungry problem, it is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
necessary to consider using GMF for the purpose of human health.

In conclusion
, I reaffirm my position that GMF has a benefit in solving the global issue,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
there are
still
a number of problems in this method,
especially
health.
Therefore
, nations around the world should
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
join
hands to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
GMF more perfect in the future.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay There remains some disagreement whether the selling and production of GMF are essential in the world's population growth

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
275 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts
  • 6band
    Is there more disadvantages than advantages in private health care?
    Nowadays, our health care community is developing strongly in our life. Numerous people believe that private health care has many disadvantages. I personally think that private health care has more advantages than disadvantages. In this essay, I will consider two sides and give my own opinions. On ...
  • 5band
    Recent research suggest that the majority of criminals who are send to prison commit crime after being released
    Nowadays, It can be seen that the numbers of offenders, re-offend just after being released from their sentence as per the report of some researchers. However, there are several reasons behind it which I will discuss in upcoming sub-sequent paragraphs along with pragmatic solutions. There are multi...
  • 5band
    Talk about the meal that you enjoy
    I love food and food stimulates my mind and body and there are so many dishes that I love. Although there are many dishes that I love, today I want to talk about a meal that I like even more, and it is called banh mi. Talking about banh mi, this is a traditional Vietnamese dish and a popular dish s...
  • 5band
    An article: Music in our lives
    Music is one of the most vital things in my life, so I could confirm that unless music excists, our lives would become so hard. Whenever you suffer from depress, your head is always healed by music. When someone need to let their hair down, music is still the best theorapy. There are several kinds ...
  • 5band
    Recent research suggest that the majority of criminals reoffend after being released from prison. What are the resons and how ro overcome it
    Nowadays, It can be seen that the numbers of offenders, reoffend just after being released from their sentence as per the report of some reseachers. However, there are sevral reasons behind it which I will discuss in upcoming sub-sequent paragraphsalong with pragmatic solutions. There are multifari...
  • 5.5band
    Positive impact of AI and robotics in society
    With the haste advancement of technology, people are approaching the fourth industrial revolution. It builds on the digital technology from the third revolution to a whole new level and provides a more holistic approach to manufacturing. Artificial intelligence and robotics are among the vital facto...