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Talk about the meal that you enjoy

Talk about the meal that you enjoy 6a85W
I love food and food stimulates my mind and body and there are so many dishes that I love. Although there are many dishes that I love, today I want to talk about a meal that I like even more, and it is called banh mi. Talking about banh mi, this is a traditional Vietnamese dish and a popular dish sold on the street both day and night. Occasionally, I always eat them for breakfast or dinner before having a lesson, because it's a nutrient-dense food. However, to buy and enjoy a delicious loaf of bread, we should choose clean and reputable restaurants if we don't want to get food poisoning. Besides, a delicious loaf of bread is a loaf of bread stuffed with the following ingredients including pate, sausage, grilled meat, spring rolls, cucumbers and a variety of herbs. On the other hand, banh mi is a dish that fits my budget, as it costs from 15 to 20 thousands dong. Apart from that, the taste of this dish is awesome, it is an indescribable taste from the smell of the different ingredients. Also, it can be said that this is an unforgettable dish if this is your first time eating banh mi. As shown above, banh mi is a really delicious food. It is a must-try that even the pickiest eaters can’t resist.
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stimulates my mind and body and there are
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that I
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is called
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banh
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Talking about
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banh
mi, this is a traditional Vietnamese
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and a popular
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sold on the street both day and night.
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, I always eat them for breakfast or dinner
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before
having a lesson,
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it's a nutrient-dense
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.
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and enjoy a delicious loaf of bread, we should choose clean and reputable restaurants if we don't want to
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poisoning.
Besides
, a delicious loaf of bread is a loaf of bread stuffed with the following ingredients including pate, sausage, grilled meat, spring rolls, cucumbers and a variety of herbs.

On the other hand
,
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banh
mi is a
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dish
that fits my budget, as it costs from 15 to 20 thousands dong. Apart from that, the taste of this
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dish
is awesome, it is an indescribable taste from the smell of the
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different
ingredients.
Also
, it can
be said
that this is an unforgettable
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if this is your
first
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banh
mi.

As shown above,
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mi is a
really
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-try that even the pickiest eaters can’t resist.
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IELTS essay Talk about the meal that you enjoy

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
225 words
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